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the_frauleinfic

I Found A Reason - Chapter One

Mar 30, 2006 19:26

Disclaimer: I don’t own RENT.

Summary: The beginning of what is promised to be a Mark/Roger high school story of epic proportions....and fluffy cuteness abounds.

Author’s Note: This story will eventually be M/R, but it’s also going to be wicked long, so you’ll have to wait awhile. It’s also sort of a request story, for ( Read more... )

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danakszoul April 2 2006, 08:29:55 UTC

I *looove* this! *eagerly awaits more*

The image of them sharing a can of Cherry Coke-- too precious! I've got total OCD, and all throughout school, I was completely incapable of doing the drink-sharing thing, which everyone did, because apparently they didn't care about germs. Except finally I wound up sharing a soda with a guy who also kind of had OCD, but who I wound up falling desperately in love with, so... yeah. I'm all long-winded, sorry.

Also, yay for music tastes (XTC, too? W00t!), and huge yay for the fact that Mark and Roger met up in a total makeout spot!

=^_^=
Anne

the_frauleinfic April 2 2006, 19:50:33 UTC

Thanks for reading! And aww to you and the guy. ^_^

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the_frauleinfic April 2 2006, 19:51:13 UTC

Glad you like it so far. Thank you!

rabidfangirlism April 2 2006, 15:03:08 UTC

“You little badass.” I mock, holding out the pack.

BEST LINE EVAAAAAR.

but anyway. fic kicks much butt. loooooooooovve it so much. loovve. +mem!

edit: *fails at html, reposts
son of edit: ..*again*

the_frauleinfic April 2 2006, 19:52:47 UTC

Thank you! It's good to hear you loooooooooovve it! ^_^

tolavieboheme April 2 2006, 15:22:57 UTC

Hee! I love it. It's so different. Not like any teen!MR I've read before, that's for sure.

the_frauleinfic April 2 2006, 19:55:12 UTC

I'm glad you think it's different. We worked hard on a lot of plot elements together to make it good. Thanks for reading!

_starrystarry April 2 2006, 17:51:39 UTC

I LOVE LOVE LOVE this because...
1. Um, I had to build molecules out of plastic spheres in sophmore Chem and had the exact same reaction as Mark: "Uh... we're in high school"
2. I like that Roger isn't some idiot. I hate it when writers dumb him down.
3. Cherry Coke is nectar of the Gods.
4. I also like that Mark doesn't love Roger's band. That's another trite plot line, I love how all your stories stay away from those.
5. I'm psyched for another loooong story like WDDMUW!
6. And if you make the OC a well developed character and not a Mary Sue (which I'm sure you will, I've read enough of your stuff), I can't wait for more!

the_frauleinfic April 2 2006, 20:01:39 UTC

Haha. The molecule thing was so weird in high school. It was fun, but really pointless and odd. I hate making Roger dumb, because it's so expected that he would be like... stupid or something. I've done it before, but smart!Roger makes me so much happier.

I've honestly never liked a female OC in my life, and when Katie told me about her I was hesitant, just because female OCs are so terribly written and obnoxious. But I really love ours. If anyone knows me, they know I hate Mary Sues. I wouldn't write this character if I thought she was one. I'm glad you have faith! ^_^

Thank you!

_starrystarry April 2 2006, 22:24:03 UTC

Good to hear she won't be a Mary Sue. I hate them so so much, most of the time because it just sounds like the twelve year-old girl person writing the story has made herself into an OC, who Mark will of course fall in love with. I know your character won't be like this though -- thanks for the affirmation.

Seriously. What is up with the plastic molecules? I remember my lab partner and I had serious issues with the little plastic string things that were supposed to be covalent bonds -- we could never double bond stuff. No CO2 for us.

That rant and strange chem note aside, I can't wait for the next part!