The Witching Hour, Part 3

May 24, 2007 21:18


Ahhhhhh.. I'm feeling intensely stressed out. I just want to stick my head in the sand and forget about it. I'm all fluttery-feeling. But anyway:

The Witching Hour

Newt scowled and squashed an uncharacteristic flare of irritation. King was up to something, he knew it. It irked him when the man skulked about in secrecy and behind his back. Usually… ( Read more... )

the witching hour

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nekobandit June 5 2007, 03:21:13 UTC
And because for some reason LJ hates me and has not been allowing me to post a comment to this chapter - here is my late chapter 3 review:

....Hahahahahahahaha!! Ohmygod. Hilarious - even though I know it probably shouldn't be, but I suppose it's more like situational irony (though I'm trying to remember if you told me Wesa's real purpose with the crew... and if not I have an idea teehee). Halfway through I went back and pulled up the email you sent me w/ the pretty little attached pictures and stared at them for quite some time... *insane giggling* (and of course - mygod King is HAWT!!!!!)
Um... I don't really know quite what is wrong with me right now but I feel rather... ridiculous. Oh well. Again what a lovely chapter!! And I've gotta ask (since you never get online anymore... :( ) how does it feel writing 2000+ word chapters? I'm sure it's quite exciting - like "type-type-type. End sentence. Oh... I think that's a little too long - I know! I can make it into two chapters!!!"
...Please forgive my dumbness
*loves*

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saaski_moql June 5 2007, 17:10:47 UTC
You added something on Rusty! You did! Saaski happy! ^o^ now one get's the feeling that she's also relatively close to King, loves her ship lotslots, and has a temper! And isn't really afraid of Newt all the much, at least enough to ahve a half-way decent conversation. Yay!

Andand you added more, even with that! King and Newt confrontation. Why do I get the feeling that although King finds Wesa attractive, he isn't completely interested in Wesa, and that adding Wesa's "soothing, calming effect" to the crew might also be a bit for Newt's benefit, one of the reasons why King can't share this with Newt yet? Or something. Next part~!

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