statelines: remus/sirius: ficlet: "a catalogue of small things" [pg-13]

[ex_stateline124]

title: a catalogue of small things
author: statelines
pairing: remus/sirius
rating: pg-13
words: 450
notes: YAY FOR RAE! i apologise for the crack; this is my brain on drugs at four am. it is uncapitalised, and there are footnotes. oh god. but it is fluff! i promise!

Comments

[raelala]

OMG NO APOLOGIES BECAUSE I LOVE IT.

Also, FOOTNOTES ARE LOVE BECAUSE I SAID SO.

Okay, I will try to turn the capslock off now.

I LOVE the footnotes... especially:

[1] sirius knocked his chin against remus' cheek, in the grocer, in the third aisle, and remus shook his fringe out of his eyes, turned on the tips of his toes, between the dairy and eggs, to press his lips to sirius'.

THAT ONE. I like the random specifics (the third aisle, dairy and eggs), things like that always make me smile because I love the details.

Also, and remus' skin hums with the gentle shock of meeting sirius' again. = beautiful.

Thank you!

[ex_stateline124]

OMG I AM SO SO SO GLAD YOU LIKE IT!!! *twirls*

eeeee! i wasn't sure if the footnotes would work, because, you know, it was like 3am and i was delusional, and at one point there were footnotes within footnotes and alsdjfa;flasf;fa i'm so glad you thought it worked.

and yay for random specifics!

♥ ♥

[jillrodde]

:O Footnote LOVE. Beautiful.

[ex_stateline124]

aww, thank you :D