Wah! That was long! It was pretty funny, too. Yunho was hilarious, hiding from girls. He's quite different from the Yunho I usually see portray in Yoosu fanfiction. Even though Jae is Su's hyung, I'm quite shock that Su would speak to Jae the way he does. Even Jae's brothers (Homin) don't talk to him like that. I guess Su can't help it since he's pissed off at Jae for buying such a gift. Yoochun's a very polite...err...robot? One of my favorite lines is when he said that his system does not recognize the name Jaejoong. lol. So I'm guessing there will be no other pairing in this story since you made JaeHoMin brothers.
Yes, I think it's pretty long myself! uf~ XD I did want to portray a very different Yunho from the way he usually appears in fics ^^ Well, yeah, actually Junsu is Jaejoong's age, although Jae is older by a few months and they are best friends so that's why his speech is more loose with him, but yeah, being pissed off helps too.
Yeah, there'll be YooSu in love only, but there'll be a small hint of jealous Chun over MinSu.
Yeah, I noticed that you put Minsu (friendship) on top, but I've yet to see any Minsu (more Hosu) interaction in this chapter, so I thought maybe you meant Hosu (friendship) instead. Well, I'm interested in seeing how Minsu act together.
im seriously loving this already. yunho is such a cutie thinking he's hot stuff and all (which he is) and robot!chun just stole the show with this line.
“What are you doing there?” Junsu asked
“You told me to go out. Is this where I’ll be staying from now on?”
i dunno, i went all AWWWW~~~~ its like he's a little puppy and being all innocent. /squishes yoochun forever. and please do continue wit these long chappies :DDD
Yeah, Yunho things he's a big shot when he's totally ignores in school by girls ^^
robot!chun is a cuttie pie just like that. He is somehow a puppy who follows his master's commands all the time and just want him to be happy but his charms will be developed in further chapters ^^
*squishes you for loving the long ass chapter and leaving me a comment*
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Yunho was hilarious, hiding from girls. He's quite different from the Yunho I usually see portray in Yoosu fanfiction.
Even though Jae is Su's hyung, I'm quite shock that Su would speak to Jae the way he does. Even Jae's brothers (Homin) don't talk to him like that. I guess Su can't help it since he's pissed off at Jae for buying such a gift.
Yoochun's a very polite...err...robot? One of my favorite lines is when he said that his system does not recognize the name Jaejoong. lol.
So I'm guessing there will be no other pairing in this story since you made JaeHoMin brothers.
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XD I did want to portray a very different Yunho from the way he usually appears in fics ^^
Well, yeah, actually Junsu is Jaejoong's age, although Jae is older by a few months and they are best friends so that's why his speech is more loose with him, but yeah, being pissed off helps too.
Yeah, there'll be YooSu in love only, but there'll be a small hint of jealous Chun over MinSu.
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Yeah, I noticed that you put Minsu (friendship) on top, but I've yet to see any Minsu (more Hosu) interaction in this chapter, so I thought maybe you meant Hosu (friendship) instead. Well, I'm interested in seeing how Minsu act together.
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This is sooo interesting and fun can't wait for part 2 <333
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Glad you like it bb
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“What are you doing there?” Junsu asked
“You told me to go out. Is this where I’ll be staying from now on?”
i dunno, i went all AWWWW~~~~ its like he's a little puppy and being all innocent. /squishes yoochun forever. and please do continue wit these long chappies :DDD
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robot!chun is a cuttie pie just like that. He is somehow a puppy who follows his master's commands all the time and just want him to be happy but his charms will be developed in further chapters ^^
*squishes you for loving the long ass chapter and leaving me a comment*
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“He’s gonna be furious anyway. Do you realize his ‘perfect girlfriend’ has something very different in-between ‘her’ legs?”
“That is just a minor detail.”
gahahhaha idiooott!! I laugh so much at that part xD
And Yunho, believe me I want a piece of you too xD
I like this story so far, (but somehow now i can't come up with comment since im incredibly hungry T_T) waiting for the next update!
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The noonas must be blind not wanting a piece of the sexy 2nd brother Kim ^^
Lol, yeah, being hungry when one try to think is not good ^^ but I'm so glad you're here bb and that you're enjoying the fic.
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