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hana2set November 17 2010, 22:28:04 UTC
I just it all in one go so I apologize for not commenting in the other chapters. Any who, I just wanted to ask something I think you forgot. What happened to the art project? Was Junsu able to find his inspiration again? Did JJ win? I know it wasn't the main point but I'm just wondering.
Overall I like it. You did a great job. ^_^

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the_lost_melody November 18 2010, 02:23:48 UTC
*claps for "one-shot" reading and you are forgiven for not commenting on other chappies ^^*

As for your question, on the initial draft, I had included a scene where there was mention to the art project, even because the ending was supposed to be at the exposition of the works made for the art project, but then I changes the setting and cropped ot that scene as it was not a main one or very important at that.

But if you are curious to know, on my original idea, JJ would win 1st prize, followed by Junsu in 2nd. Junsu did find his inspiration again thanks to Yoochun and the painting that he would present for the contest was named "My Sunflower garden" - an allusion to Yoochun and his love for sunflowers and the painting itself would be Yoochun's portrait (as Junsu saw him)

Anyway, thanks a lot for reading it to the end and for the compliment ^^

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archaiclover November 17 2010, 23:13:53 UTC
KJHDFLAKSJDFH I WAS FREAKING OUT THIS ENTIRE CHAPTER.
It was amazing! I adored this story. ^^ Great job!
I love how you write Chunnie and Junsu. :) And I'm also so happy Yoochun ended up human-ish. :D

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the_lost_melody November 18 2010, 02:26:15 UTC
*Loves the key smashing ^_^* I can only imagine how many people were dying at the end of part 1 XD

Nonetheless, thanks a lot for your comment bb, I'm glad you enjoyed it so much and that you loved the character's portrayal ^^ TYSM for reading ^^

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the_lost_melody November 18 2010, 02:32:42 UTC
*edit* keyboard smashing, not key smashing.. lol

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charmed501 November 18 2010, 18:41:57 UTC
I really liked your story. It was very different form anything I've read before and it was a nice change. I love how you were able to make it seem as if it was really possible for a robot to become human. When you read the story it seems so realistic, somehow you don't question it. I'm looking foreword to reading more of your stories. :D

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the_lost_melody November 20 2010, 18:54:21 UTC
Thank you for the HUGE compliment. Seeing that by reading it, people might actually feel like it's possible for such a thing to happen, makes me really happy to have accomplished that task ^_^

Thanks so much for the support.

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jaehominjukey November 20 2010, 15:10:23 UTC
hiii~~~ ok, ive read and fell in love with this.. ive watched the drama before and boy this story just makes me fall in love with yoosu all over again~~ hahaha.. thanks for this~ totally A M A Z I N G ~ ~ ~

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the_lost_melody November 20 2010, 18:55:32 UTC
THANK YOU SO MUCH ^^ I'm glad that this piece of story made you fall in love with them again. Thanks for reading ^^

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jaehominjukey November 22 2010, 23:00:12 UTC
a pleasure to read.. :) you deserve a thumbs up from me!! chu~~ ♥♥

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the_lost_melody November 23 2010, 21:14:42 UTC
*hugs* Thanks

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inazahri November 23 2010, 09:23:27 UTC
sigh!!!!! love the ending.. sure happily ever after. (thumbs up)

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the_lost_melody November 23 2010, 21:15:12 UTC
;) They deserved it ^^

Thanks a lot for reading.

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