Comments | the_lost_melody: What if... [Chapter 1]

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What if... [Chapter 1] - "Chances"

Jun 07, 2011 02:34

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drama, yoochun!centric, pg, title: what if..., fantasy /au, yoosu, chaptered fanfic, romance

Comments 27

dorkii_simba June 7 2011, 19:34:12 UTC

with yoochun's half answers and personality i would have thought he was cheating on junsu with some other guy or chick. his natural playboy-pimp look doesn't help me either LOL! but anyways :DDD i'm really enjoying this so far & ♥ i'm really excited about GD's character. will be waiting for the next update! & thank you for writing! :DDD ♥

the_lost_melody June 7 2011, 19:59:16 UTC

LOL at Yoochun's natural playboy-pimp look not helping... It's so true though ^^
I have lots of fun writting GD's character here. He's one of my personal inspirers in writting fics ^^

Thank YOU for reading ^_^

febxsan June 7 2011, 20:38:40 UTC

next chapterrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr plaseeeeeeeeeeeeeee >

the_lost_melody June 8 2011, 18:47:26 UTC

^_^ It'll be out shortly

missyoosu June 8 2011, 05:17:23 UTC

Whoa. Such a heated fight between the lovers. Poor Junsu. I would be frustrated with Yoochun as well. Why would he say things that he thinks Junsu would want to hear only to end up doing the opposite? He is waaaay too comfortable with his family; he needs to experience life and its difficulties. I'm really interested in how G-D will help him and how this whole going back in time works.

the_lost_melody June 8 2011, 18:49:21 UTC

Yep... Yoochun can be pretty frustrating here... Junsu is one with a whole lot of patience ^_^
Yoochun needs to know how to make decisions and see that he needs to grow up so GD will help him a whole lot in that department XD

Thanks for coming back to read <3

ext_378509 June 25 2011, 17:34:15 UTC

Are you kidding me? ~ It's so great ^^~

I'm so curious with what will happen next @@ ~ and who is the stranger ~

I like the way you create "Junsu" with a strong characteristic and at least, he's not too innocent as some fics I read before @@ ~

I think I see your "Yoochun" here, the one goes through almost your fanfics ^^ but still great ~

I'm go reading chapter 2 and 3 ~

Thanks for writing this fic ^^

the_lost_melody June 26 2011, 23:33:18 UTC

Thanks so much for the comment, dear ^^
I do tend to give Junsu strong personalities (usually), since I don't like to write him being too innocent ^^ As for "Yoochun", yeah, his personna doesn't change much, does it? Although here he is a very confused character, so maybe its a little different from the usual sweet "Yoochun"? XD

Thanks for reading