I don't like it. I love it. It would've been easier for me if they called each others name even once during the conversation. It probably only my stupid brain but I couldn't figure out at some time who's talking. Anyway, I'll just re- read it more carefully. Thank for sharing, can't wait for tomorrow.
For a moment you got me there... sigh~ I'm glad you're loving it ^^
Oh and by the way, thanks for your suggestion. I didn't realize it was kind of hard to know who was talking at some parts of the dialogue but you are right. I just assumed that "He" would distinguish Yoochun from Junsu who is talking in the first person.
I checked it and inserted their names a couple of times, so I guess it's easier now. Thanks again for pointing that out ^^
Thanks for reading and I guess I'll "see" you tomorrow then ^^
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It would've been easier for me if they called each others name even once during the conversation.
It probably only my stupid brain but I couldn't figure out at some time who's talking.
Anyway, I'll just re- read it more carefully.
Thank for sharing, can't wait for tomorrow.
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Oh and by the way, thanks for your suggestion. I didn't realize it was kind of hard to know who was talking at some parts of the dialogue but you are right. I just assumed that "He" would distinguish Yoochun from Junsu who is talking in the first person.
I checked it and inserted their names a couple of times, so I guess it's easier now. Thanks again for pointing that out ^^
Thanks for reading and I guess I'll "see" you tomorrow then ^^
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