Hector's Hardship, McLochrie's Mistake.

Oct 22, 2007 23:56

Here we go, I've written the third option. It didn't turn out to actually have much of Captain McLochrie in it all that much, but I am still happy with it.
This would be situated in the start of the second book, The Livid Lighthouse. Not much else to say, here you go:

This was getting costly. The plumber had been staring at the dripping ceiling for ( Read more... )

worshipful company of plumbers, wet, sloop

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I read it oblivion_soap October 22 2007, 14:43:11 UTC
I have a nautical term for you: go fuck yourself. Any pirate worth his weight in gold would tell you that means: "Great work. There's a few bits here and there that could be changed, tweaked and reworked but those are essentially all the same things and I am just repeating myself. Well done all the same, pal. Yep. Pretty good. I enjoy the transitions into the Neitherworld, by the way. Good luck with the rest of your writing. Talk to you later." It's an archaic expression.

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ryoflame October 22 2007, 20:40:51 UTC
Your work reminds me a LOT of Terry Pratchett's, which is a very good thing. You have a wonderful imagination, and I look forward to reading more~

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