Comments | the_metzler: Drawlings and Dinings

the_metzler

Drawlings and Dinings

Mar 04, 2008 23:42

Such a liar by omission, I am.

I have indeed been writing every day, yes, but that does not mean you silly people can read it. You'll just have to wait.

Who am I talking to? No one reads this stuff unless I tell them to.

Ah well, here's something I whipped up for Story Structure. It's kind of dodgy in some places, because I was rushing through it, and ( Read more... )

chilton m'dorf, editing, april

Comments 4

katewonder March 4 2008, 22:22:38 UTC

Was this the one that had to have a defined beginning, middle and end? Was that due today?

... I really need to start writing our homework down.

And I love you reading stuff outloud. The class gets so nervous, ah ha ha. I'll read something out when I have something. Bit hard to do today given that I don't have anything. WAVE YOUR PEN SOME MORE, ALEX!

What was the task for this?

I liked it, by the way. Her talking about the narrator amuses me, and I think I've told you that I love the premise. 4ish. Ahahaha.

Anyway. Gotta finish the homework due today. My precis is exactly 50 words. I am proud. ALSO! Do not forget a cover letter, he'll get angry.

ggreatbatch August 14 2008, 08:19:59 UTC

Herschel was a famous astronomer.I don't know you I just thought you had a nice head.

discardtheold March 16 2009, 12:14:03 UTC

You know I do think that this is a little amazing.
I liked the premise at the start, with the narrator interacting, though it does make me wonder if this is a staple within your Neitherworld or if you have just done it for class?

the_metzler March 19 2009, 06:48:50 UTC

I -love- playing with the narrator in The Neitherworld. It's almost a character in its own right these days. No such thing as a 4th wall anymore.

I was mostly just fiddling around and seeing how much I could get away with in this piece. I usually use class excercises as an excuse to experiment with styles. This piece didn't even get used for class, in the end.