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the_panic_light

Oil and Vinegar.

Jun 14, 2009 14:11

Week 2 entry for the June round of brigits_flame. My prompt was "Oil and VinegarI'm really not sure about this one this week. Due to various circumstances, I've been quite emotional while writing it, but despite that, I'm not 100% sure that I've conveyed that emotion in what I've written. Neither am I sure that I've not written a cliché. Finally, I'm not sure ( Read more... )

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the_panic_light June 16 2009, 02:22:46 UTC

Thank you, dear. Lovely words. x

amused4ever June 15 2009, 23:12:47 UTC

Whatever. Screw your worries about the prompt and cliche, that was AMAZING. I forgot I was reading, and I felt it. Damnit, I wanted to cry. ARGGGHHH. Oooh, and I absolutely loved the opening, with the dream about the fish, and then--well, you know.

FANTASTIC job.

the_panic_light June 16 2009, 02:24:08 UTC

Flattering! Thank you, what lovely things to say. I'm glad I seem to have done an alright job... x

cedarwolfsinger June 16 2009, 01:03:09 UTC

Very powerful piece. If you don't think you conveyed emotion, then I can't imagine the piece in which you DO think you convey emotion. Very real. Very poignant, very sad. Very powerful.

the_panic_light June 16 2009, 02:24:33 UTC

And powerful compliments, there! Thank you very much.

ephemeralbreath June 18 2009, 03:17:33 UTC

I'm a little late on the uptake, but I thought you did an admirable job this week despite your concerns. Your imagery is touching and gives us a sense of intimacy without being too provocative for the subject of the piece. I enjoyed this very much.

the_panic_light June 18 2009, 04:56:56 UTC

Thank you - that means much to me. x