Comments | the_panic_light: Caesar

the_panic_light

Caesar

Jun 20, 2009 16:16

A bit of a silly one this week, for week 3 of brigits_flame. I got really stuck on the prompt for this week, "Caesar", had no idea what to write, so I drummed up this. I don't pretend it's very good, but I had to write something! Hope it at least entertains.

( Caesar )

Comments 7

saturnangel587 June 21 2009, 04:07:09 UTC

And with that, she held out her straightened arm, thumb parallel to the ground...then slowly turned it down.

Really, everything she says in response to him is epic, but the visualization of this really nails it for me. Awesome stuff. Good luck this week! ^_^

the_panic_light June 22 2009, 23:31:12 UTC

Hehe, thanks! :]

ephemeralbreath June 21 2009, 23:57:23 UTC

Entertaining, it was. :)

I LOVE GLADIATOR. Haha.

Small thing: Fifth paragraph from the end, "appall."

the_panic_light June 22 2009, 23:31:22 UTC

Thank you for the correction, and thank you! ;]

drippedonpaper June 22 2009, 19:33:15 UTC

I thought this was hilarious:) Great job!

You're very creative to come up with this:)

She was obviously not in love with him (anymore?)

the_panic_light June 22 2009, 23:31:48 UTC

Thank you very much! :]

I'm not sure, but I don't think she was ever in love with him...how could she be in love with such a jerk? :]

amused4ever June 25 2009, 22:59:37 UTC

HA, that was entertaining. What a jerk...