Fated For Love: Part Four

Aug 10, 2011 10:20

Title: Fated For Love
Author: Ru_salki99
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: John/Rodney, John/Evan, Evan/David, Teyla/Ronon, Jack/Daniel (mentions of John/Teyla/Ronon & John/Evan/David)
Beta: Many, many thanks to rock_mafia for her wonderful beta skills. I'd have been lost without her.
Artist: Huge thank you to danceswithgary for her wonderful art :D
Author's notes/warnings: As this ( Read more... )

rating: nc-17, pairing: john/rodney, fic: stargate atlantis

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kiraalexia August 12 2011, 19:51:07 UTC
Great story. Loved every moment.

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ru_salki99 August 20 2011, 20:42:36 UTC
Thank you :D

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sexycazzy August 13 2011, 14:30:44 UTC
This is a great and awesome AU for John & Rodney and the ending was just perfect! Loved it!

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ru_salki99 August 20 2011, 20:43:19 UTC
Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it. Was a bit unsure about the ending myself, but YAAAAY :D

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rawa_02 August 15 2011, 03:31:09 UTC
For me, Rodney killing the homeless guy killed the story.

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ru_salki99 August 20 2011, 20:45:10 UTC
Sorry you feel that way. But it was necessary to show how Rodney had changed and accepted his new life. If he hadn't been able to do that, then he would never have been able to give himself over to John the way he did.

Thanks for reading anyway.

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rawa_02 August 20 2011, 22:24:55 UTC
I enjoyed the story up to that point. Feeding on criminals didn't bother me. It was making homelessness a crime that did.

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ru_salki99 August 22 2011, 04:22:51 UTC
Oh, that wasn't what i was implying at all, tho looking at it, I can see why you would feel that way. I'll re-edit it to change that. They were criminals who just happened to be homeless if that makes sense.

My apologies, and thanks for the feedback. I'll get to that as soon as i have a chance.

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ophelia1880 August 15 2011, 19:24:33 UTC
Loved this fic. I don't usually read complete AU, but I saw DWG's accompanying art and it intrigued me.

I loved the way John was so alpha male and in private let Rodney take the lead sometimes but was always ready to step in and take the lead back when needed.

I really liked the way Rodney developed, how we saw Rodney as a Priest and then after he was turned coming to terms with the reality of his existence.

It's a very rich AU with potential for so much more. One criticism (and it's not really a criticism more me just whining) is that it ended too soon. I was about 85% finished and I was thinking "No! No! it's going to end soon and there's so much more for these characters to explore" but maybe that's just me being greedy ;o)

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ru_salki99 August 20 2011, 20:51:19 UTC
I could have written so much more to this, I really could have. However, life and deadlines got in the way. It's unfortunate as there was just so much more to explore in this world. Maybe if I have the time or notion I'll come back and do a prequel or something... or even a sequel set centuries from now when John and Rodney are well established as one of the most fearsome vampire pairings of their time. Not promising anything though :p

thanks so much for reading and so glad you enjoyed it :D

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verob2002 August 16 2011, 06:31:10 UTC
The fic and danceswithgary art are fantastic. The art was an excellent trailer, and your story was not a let down. Quite the contrary, it was brilliant! Thank you so much for sharing.

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ru_salki99 August 20 2011, 20:54:00 UTC
Thank you so much :D

Glad you enjoyed it!

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