Fic Commentary: Do You Remember the First Time?

[the_tenzo]

Moving forward with the fic commentary meme! If you'd like to get in on it as well (which I encourage whole-heartedly--I love writing these things to a shameful degree), here's the original post.

Comments

[wiggiemomsi]

GAH! The hotness factor of this already-hot story has increased tenfold with your added commentary!! Love it!

*Hugs*

[editrx]

OMG.

And, as always, great commentary. I love seeing how your mind works while it's writing.

[the_tenzo]

LOL Or doesn't work sometimes as the case may be!

[ladychi]

I love DVD extras. I totally laughed out loud with you on several points...

I have a little bit of a kink for Dom!Doctor, as well.

[the_tenzo]

You can always request one yaknow!

Mmm Dom!Doctor. I may have to do a bit of exploration of that in my other 'verse because, as is established in my Tencest fic, the alt!Doctor becomes a bit of a pimp once he settles down with Rose.

[salimali]

Just wonderful thank you. I choose to believe he did it on purpose and that he likes people to believe he's clueless, but like you say he really is the smoothest operator in the galaxy x x x

[kat0408]

This is my all-time fav fic and not just cause it's smutty - ok, you can stop laughing now. I love it because I think the Doctor did do it on purpose and is a sentimental soul, which IMO is just as phwoar as the steamy stuff. I love it because he is a flirt and he knows it and is fooling no-one. And I love it, because he loves Rose. He must, he could have seduced her anywhere, but he chose here which links back to my first point.
Reading your thoughts while you write are fascinating, I look forward to the next one