To the Waters and the Wild Chapter 10 Commentary

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Comments

[catyuy]

Very nice.....but I'd like to point out that you once again have the human Doctor removing shoes he isn't wearing.

[np_complete]

Very interesting. I would love to read some of what Rose saw on her trips through alternate dimensions, sometime.

I liked this line:

She drew him in to a bear hug and squeezed until he made an undignified squeaking noise

and

"Oi!" both Doctors protested at once and then narrowed their eyes at one another, as if each had stolen the other's thunder.

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