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the_tenzo

Fic: Anthropomorphic (1/1)

Sep 05, 2010 14:22

Title: Anthropomorphic
Author: the_tenzo
Character(s): Rory Williams, Eleven (implied Doctor/Rose, Amy/Rory)
Rating: All Ages
Word Count: ~1500
Spoilers: Set prior to The Hungry Earth (5x08)
Summary: Rory Williams knows there is a ghost on the TARDIS.

A/N: Another fic written for the doctor_rose_fix -athon. cainangrey prompted "Rose is a data ghost on the TARDIS. Rory keeps ( Read more... )

character(s): rory, rating: all ages, fic: anthropomorphic, length: one-shot, character(s): eleven, genre: angst

Comments 60

starlightmoonla September 5 2010, 21:47:23 UTC

*sniffles* Beautiful.

the_tenzo September 6 2010, 00:01:51 UTC

Thank you! *hands hanky*

honorh September 5 2010, 21:54:26 UTC

Oh, that's lovely! I can just see Rose/Bad Wolf, a data ghost, and you nailed Eleven's and Rory's voices. Beautiful!

the_tenzo September 6 2010, 00:55:15 UTC

This was my first time writing both Eleven and Rory, so it glees me to hear you say that! Thanks so much :D

ladychi September 5 2010, 21:55:05 UTC

Oh, YOU.

I love this, I really do. I love the description of the Doctor from Rory's point of view -- wondering just what sort of man he really was, getting a glimpse of the Doctor's past. I love how the Doctor interacted with the ghost of Rose.

I love just... everything about this. I really do.

I'll stop flailing now but... this fic has been in my head ALL DAY. That's how good it is.

the_tenzo September 6 2010, 01:02:48 UTC

Aw thank youuuu :D

I feel like I'm sort of wrestling with who Eleven is, and Rory's POV is helping me along there (which is why I am so ecstatic that we get to keep him!).

Also, I just watched PotW again and started bawling when she finally opens the TARDIS. Hot damn, this show. So much love.

wickedgillie September 5 2010, 22:07:58 UTC

OH.

This took my breath away.

Damn.

Wow.

You have rendered me monosyllabic!

the_tenzo September 6 2010, 01:03:21 UTC

Why, thanks! I appreciate your monosyllables :D

sammie28 September 5 2010, 22:42:41 UTC

I'm really coming to love Eleven and Amy/Rory, and I loved what you did with this story. The vestiges of Rose, always looking and heart-broken for her Doctor, particularly at the time when she looked into the heart of the TARDIS, were well done. And, of course the TARDIS would keep part of her there ( ... )

the_tenzo September 6 2010, 02:21:44 UTC

Wow, thank you so much!

I have a huge love for Rory, though this is the first time I've given writing him a go. I love that he's the one who runs to help people when they're injured, even the "little people" who just were in the wrong place at the wrong time. That was the same quality I always admired in Rose, so it figures I'd be a sucker for Rory, too.

I do very much hope that Moffat does write a happily married couple in the TARDIS. Like, I hope he doesn't have them arguing all the time or nagging each other constantly like married couples are so often portrayed in the media. It's kind of a sore spot for me because I have been very, very happily married for ten years and my marriage is nothing like that snarky/naggy/brink-of-divorce-at-all-times BS you see on TV so much.

Whoa, rant! Sorry! Back on track: Thank you so much for reading and for your lovely feedback. :D