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the_thinktank

SGA: Linear

Oct 19, 2009 19:43

Title: Linear
Author: Vescaus
Pairing: Sheppard/Mckay
Summary: As John sits in a prison cell, with a jilted Rodney, he ponders on the evolution of his relationships.
Spoilers: None
Rating: PG-13
Words: 9k
Warnings: Character death
Notes: Written in 2008 before the cancellation was announced but never posted. Beta'd then by SGA fan decadency_decays, no ( Read more... )

fic: linear, fandom: sga, pairing; sheppard/mckay

Comments 6

sdrana October 19 2010, 20:56:32 UTC

Okay. All I can assume is that I'm cried out from watching way too many tear-jerker movies lately, because that's got to be the only explanation why I'm not bawling my eyes out right now (in a totally good but painful way). That was an amazing read with an amazing twist, and...wow. Yeah. Gods, poor John, and poor Rodney, dying alone. Definitely worth the time to read.

the_thinktank October 25 2010, 21:01:46 UTC

Thank you for taking the time to read and review. I'm glad you enjoyed it and I hope it didn't complete depress you :)

rawa_02 October 20 2010, 12:22:36 UTC

This is going (as soon as I stop crying) to Memories.

the_thinktank October 25 2010, 21:02:15 UTC

I'm sorry you have depressed you so much! But thank you for commenting and I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

anonymous October 20 2010, 18:35:51 UTC

Amazing and very much in character: Sheppard is really that stupid in canon and I was wondering why McKay seemed so out-of-character, so the fact that he was just a hallucination borne of guilt and grief makes a lot of sense.

This is a great story, thanks for sharing!

the_thinktank October 25 2010, 21:05:51 UTC

Having a twist was the only way I could make Rodney and John so out of character in such as drastic setting. I was trying to get across how the mind can play tricks on people and how we perceive people in certain situations.
I'm glad you enjoyed it, though. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment :)