your only comment because your friends are obviously too scared to tell you the truth...
anonymous
July 19 2005, 05:39:18 UTC
you are a fucking terrible "songwriter" and you should not EVER be allowed to call yourself an artist.
your ideas are simplistic and almost meaningless, in the way that they sound like an elementary school poem.
this song, in particular, is about like fourty-thousand different things. it's like you just wrote some words that rhymed and then explained what they miiight mean. It is fluid in no way, and to get to the point- you, sir, sound like an un-educated, wann-be-rockstar, adolescent.
interpretation!
anonymous
July 31 2005, 22:01:13 UTC
verseONE i look down the isle & i see your face as i feel like a child i need your embrace when i feel no control & i let myself go i cant even remember the love of your grace
i am so confused!!! are you getting married in this part? and could you please explain to me what "the love of your grace" is? what the fuck does that mean?? seriously. i'm so glad that you think all of this shit has to rhyme.
verseTWO its almost like im not breathing its almost like im not feeling your heart... its not beating my mind has scattered&is fleeing so many things to worry about so many lies... that have come about when i see yourself in the mirror i see the truth, i see the light
alright. can you please explain to me what it's like to ALMOST be like you arent breathing or feeling? and did this person just fucking die?! if your mind is scattered, how the fuck is it fleeing? seriously. how can you see someone elses "self" in the mirror? wait..i'm confused, again because this shit doesnt make sense whatsoever.
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your ideas are simplistic and almost meaningless, in the way that they sound like an elementary school poem.
this song, in particular, is about like fourty-thousand different things. it's like you just wrote some words that rhymed and then explained what they miiight mean. It is fluid in no way, and to get to the point- you, sir, sound like an un-educated, wann-be-rockstar, adolescent.
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i look down the isle
& i see your face
as i feel like a child
i need your embrace
when i feel no control
& i let myself go
i cant even remember
the love of your grace
i am so confused!!! are you getting married in this part? and could you please explain to me what "the love of your grace" is? what the fuck does that mean?? seriously. i'm so glad that you think all of this shit has to rhyme.
verseTWO
its almost like im not breathing
its almost like im not feeling
your heart... its not beating
my mind has scattered&is fleeing
so many things to worry about
so many lies... that have come about
when i see yourself in the mirror
i see the truth, i see the light
alright. can you please explain to me what it's like to ALMOST be like you arent breathing or feeling? and did this person just fucking die?! if your mind is scattered, how the fuck is it fleeing? seriously. how can you see someone elses "self" in the mirror? wait..i'm confused, again because this shit doesnt make sense whatsoever.
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