Guad up bro? Thier IS a couple of good lines in thier; however since this is a confessional poem talking about some gal that inspires you, i dont really think it truly reflects sensible you. Best poem i think is yellow purse, lonely church and the wife beater poem. Your stepping outside of yourself on these. Oh, cuaght Veronicas journal, unless you want to go to austin to just get a feel for competition against other texas teams and basically just have fun, I think you should go. However if your intent on competing to win. Dont do this! You all will get slaughtered! Truth be told, Youre the only real poet thier at AA. You and Amado. Slam wise, I think you all ways to go with you of course showing any real promise. I want you to try and memorise youre stuff and would love to coach you on delivery. peace my freind, ricardo
That Is Exactly What I Need. I Need To Be Coached On My Delivery. And For The Slam Today I Have My 3 Peices About 85% Memorised. And I Do Want To Go To Austin To Just Get A Feel For The Competion. And Maybe Pick Up A Few Pointers While I'm There. And I Just Started To Practice On My Delivery With Pete Gunn aka J. Ivey. Just So If We Do Go To Regionals I Dont Get Brutally Slaughtered! And Just Slaughtered! And Oh yeah You Might Want To Give "Lost In The Great What If" A Look Over. Peace
Yeah I Think I Will Work On This One More I Currently ReDid "Lost Talent" And Think That It Would Be Good For Regionals.Cuz I Think I Finally Found My Voice! Peace
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Guad up bro? Thier IS a couple of good lines in thier; however since this is a confessional poem talking about some gal that inspires you, i dont really think it truly reflects sensible you. Best poem i think is yellow purse, lonely church and the wife beater poem. Your stepping outside of yourself on these. Oh, cuaght Veronicas journal, unless you want to go to austin to just get a feel for competition against other texas teams and basically just have fun, I think you should go. However if your intent on competing to win. Dont do this! You all will get slaughtered! Truth be told, Youre the only real poet thier at AA. You and Amado. Slam wise, I think you all ways to go with you of course showing any real promise. I want you to try and memorise youre stuff and would love to coach you on delivery.
peace my freind,
ricardo
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Adrian
Read the Lost in the GReat what if...
Work on this one to slam! Take this one to regionals!
Ricardo
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