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theangelisrafel

dɪsɪnˈtʃɑːntɪd Part IV

Oct 20, 2011 00:50

Fandom: My Chemical Romance

Rating: NC-17, but the chapter is PG

Pairing: Gerard/Mikey

Summary: MCR moves into the Paramour mansion. Mikey has some mixed feelings about the move but he tries to push them aside and attempts to adjust to his new environment. It doesn't take long before eerie and strange things start happening. The longer the band stays ( Read more... )

mikey way, gerard way, fanfiction, waycest

Comments 10

kinghat October 20 2011, 10:50:27 UTC

Omg omg omg I had missed this so much! great chapter! I'm exited for more! don't leave us this long again!

theangelisrafel October 21 2011, 02:05:51 UTC

I'll try not! And for NaNoWriMo I'm actually using this as my "novel"

x_monroeville_x October 20 2011, 22:54:36 UTC

This is the best Waycest fic I've read in a while! Mind if I add you so I don't miss the next part? :)

theangelisrafel October 21 2011, 02:06:14 UTC

No, not at all :D

Saying this without finishing the chapter goose_gir1 October 20 2011, 23:23:01 UTC

This is lovely, but, uh. "this whole section is just. And this last line. I can’t even. CAN’T EVEN. GTFECHUDGBEHJXCBFYUGUBHWDY <3)
"? I think your beta left that in by accident. :P (Their not wrong, though, it is epic.)

And then again when I do finish it! goose_gir1 October 20 2011, 23:52:16 UTC

First of all, fixing my own mistake up there, I should have said *they're* not wrong. x)

Secondly, I should learn not to read this fic when I'm by myself in a cold room! *nervous laughter*
This chapter continues the eerieness beautifully, and amps up the creepy just that little, needed bit. I'm really loving how you switch the tone between the darkworld-esque freak out/general malaise sequences and then the light scenes.
The pressure at the back of his head... psychic pressure? Symptom of his own stress? Both? Hmmm.
I'm glad you updated. (:

("He can feel it straight down to his ringer tips, hands shaking as he stumbles up right..." It seems like that should be 'fingers'.)

Re: And then again when I do finish it! theangelisrafel October 21 2011, 02:11:52 UTC

Ugh thanks for pointing those out, I was half asleep when I was removing comments and adjusting the edits on it.

And my writing is creepy? o: I've never actually thought I was that good at it, I figured it was okay but it actually creeps people out? x:

Thanks for reading though! :D

Re: And then again when I do finish it! goose_gir1 October 25 2011, 20:47:18 UTC

It's a good thing! Don't be embarassed! :P
Dfinitely a good creepy.

isayhonesty November 5 2011, 19:10:06 UTC

Port Mikey! Stay strong babe!

shadow_plague November 14 2011, 18:01:22 UTC

I. Love. This. STORY! And goose_gir1 is entirly right about not reading this in a cold room by oneself. It is super freaky! It's hard for it not to be when Mikey's seeing shit like that. I will only read this one at school or at the library because I've been seeing more and more stuff in my own house and it's really freaking me out...

But seriously, amazing writing and increadable ideas.