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theangelisrafel

dɪsɪnˈtʃɑːntɪd Part VI

Nov 27, 2011 23:57

Fandom: My Chemical Romance

Rating: NC-17, but the chapter is PG-13

Pairing: Gerard/Mikey

Summary: MCR moves into the Paramour mansion. Mikey has some mixed feelings about the move but he tries to push them aside and attempts to adjust to his new environment. It doesn't take long before eerie and strange things start happening. The longer the band ( Read more... )

waycest

Comments 5

sakurabubble November 29 2011, 05:13:53 UTC

I just read this entire story and let me just say: It's freaking awesome :)

I love the creepiness, the paranoia, etc.

I'm not normally the biggest fan of this pair (I mean I like them but they aren't my main ship ;P) but this story completely turning me on to waycest. (:

Can't wait to read moarr :3

theangelisrafel December 6 2011, 10:58:29 UTC

I love waycest when it's written well, because half the time it's weird and just the dialog doesn't fit for them. I'm glad that you like it though :D

And yay creepiness is affective \0/

sylvaine57 December 6 2011, 00:06:58 UTC

Oooo, this is really interesting! I can't wait to see where you go with this! :D I like how you only find out gradually, almost peripherally, what's going on, like Mikey is so wrapped inside his head and terrified of coming out and seeing what's happening that he doesn't really say things outright. Uhhhh that didn't really explain my thoughts very well at all. :/

I read in a reply you posted to an earlier comment that you were using this as you NaNo novel? Does that mean we can expect many more updates in the near future? *excited* (I'm going to friend you so I'll know when you do! I hope you don't mind.)

theangelisrafel December 6 2011, 10:57:28 UTC

I was using it for NaNo but life got kind of busy (work, school etc.) so I had to stop :( I do intend to keep on writing. I actually have the next chapter edited and all ready to post, I've just been a bit busy since I have finals coming up soon.

Also D: I don't understand what you're really saying

sylvaine57 December 6 2011, 22:18:41 UTC

Oh, good luck with finals! I know how stressful that can get. :/

Hm, okay, let me see if I can explain it better now that I've got some sleep. :D Mikey's POV feels a little disjointed, unclear, like he's not really a very reliable narrator, which fits really well with what he's going through at the moment, mentally, and with how he's trying to pretend like there's nothing going on. So that's awesome. :D