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Drabble: "The Post-Incident Evaluation"

Jun 25, 2010 17:38

Title: "The Post-Incident Evaluation"
Author: TheAquamarine
Beta: Jess, who is brilliant :)
Word Count: 100 on the dot!
Prompt: Fight (though it has little to do with it..lol)
Spoilers: Through the Season 2 finale.
Rating: PG
Characters: the whole gang!
Summary: "Witnesses Montgomery, Ryan, Esposito, and Parish claim the victim was shot through the ( Read more... )

fandom: castle, genre: angst, type: drabble, pairing: castle/beckett

Comments 19

luna1130 June 26 2010, 08:08:48 UTC

This is a really original take on it and totally rocks. Thanks a lot for sharing!

theaquamarine June 27 2010, 20:04:12 UTC

And thank you for commenting!! I'm really glad you enjoyed it!! :)

greyslostwho June 26 2010, 10:41:33 UTC

Oh, beautiful. Lost for words :)

theaquamarine June 27 2010, 20:04:55 UTC

I'll take your loss for words as a good thing ;) Thank you so much for your review!!

stardust_20 June 26 2010, 14:02:26 UTC

OW.

That was perfect. One of the most creative things I've ever read. Awesome job!

theaquamarine June 27 2010, 20:06:29 UTC

Thank you so much! I really appreciate it!! :) And I'm glad the emotions read the way I wanted them to- I really wanted people to feel the "OW" as you put it! :)

evraealtana June 29 2010, 03:44:38 UTC

Wow. Very lovely. I especially admired the bit about the getaway car. It was creative the first time I read it, and it still is.

You're a very talented writer, though I'm sure your beta is lovely as well ;)

Oh, sorry, is that YOU'RE beta? =P