Realistic Chapter 8

Feb 19, 2009 22:07

Title: Realistic - Chapter 8/14
Author: theartoffic
Type: LOTR RPS AU
Pairing: Orlando/Elijah
Rating: Adult

Summary: In the 21st century Artificial Intelligence is still in its infancy, some scientists toy with the idea of creating robots that look, and act, and think like human beings; in the future they are going to succeed. Realistics look real, feel real ( Read more... )

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theartoffic February 20 2009, 15:15:21 UTC
I am so happy this sent you off to sleep with a smile!!! :D Elijah is so innocent in this regard but he's enjoying the discovery! *hugs*

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ismenin February 20 2009, 09:59:32 UTC
Bless him. How poignant it is that he doesn't even know how to choose a new shirt, or understand what looks good on him. I love this creation of yours, it's super. Hugs :D xxx

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theartoffic February 20 2009, 15:19:49 UTC
I'd love to be the clerk helping him pick out his clothes *waggly brows* :D
I'm so glad you're enjoying this! *hugs*

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verangel February 20 2009, 11:44:26 UTC
OMG...I saw this this morning and melted. I am over half way through and feeling all the new sensations with him. I am at the part where Jason was flirting and Elijah JUST realizeed it. They start talking about "Realistics". "He knows, but he simply says nothing." Oh that statement regarding the programming had me so curious. Well off to work with my copy made to read at lunch. I LOVE THIS SO MUCH!!! I am so happy to see this. hugs you tons and more xoxoxo v

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theartoffic February 20 2009, 15:20:47 UTC
*hugs and adores you!!* I'm so glad it made ya melt and I hope it's a sweet part of your lunch today :D *hugs & loffs*

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lisabellex February 20 2009, 12:11:06 UTC
I adore the way you've written experiences like shopping for clothes and music, and receiving compliments, as being such a novelty for Elijah. It's all so fresh and new to him - Orlando has certainly opened up his world, and I love that he's exploring and learning, yet remains so sweet and untouched.

My favourite part of this chapter has to be the interaction between Elijah and Jason, the record store assistant. That was so precious! And being me, I'd love to read a side story about these two. *g*

This is super, and I love it so much.

Bravo!

:D

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theartoffic February 20 2009, 15:24:01 UTC
You'd like a side story eh? That could always happen you know ... after all Jason does look like Charlie Hunnam in my head so I could get down with that :D. Maybe Jason extends his lunch ... There has to be a bathroom where he knows they wouldn't get caught ... *brain takes a detour*

*hugs & adores* <3's

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lisabellex February 20 2009, 15:45:49 UTC
Would love a side story!

Now you've got me thinking about all the possibilities with this twosome. Bring it on!

*hugs gleefully*

:D

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verangel February 21 2009, 00:15:15 UTC
Side please! Not in this story. *shivers* (he was cute though and Charlie Hunnam?...whoa...but NO)

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silvermere February 20 2009, 12:28:58 UTC
I seem to have missed your last posting, so lucky me I've had 2 to read.

Am loving this. Elijah is so vulnerable - just the way I like him! Wonderful writing, yet again.

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theartoffic February 20 2009, 15:25:17 UTC
I'm so glad you're enjoying this!! I love vulnerable Elijah too! *hugs* :D

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