Realistic Chapter 8

Feb 19, 2009 22:07

Title: Realistic - Chapter 8/14
Author: theartoffic
Type: LOTR RPS AU
Pairing: Orlando/Elijah
Rating: Adult

Summary: In the 21st century Artificial Intelligence is still in its infancy, some scientists toy with the idea of creating robots that look, and act, and think like human beings; in the future they are going to succeed. Realistics look real, feel real ( Read more... )

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ph34rmoi February 21 2009, 11:09:43 UTC
Heehee. Gotta love how Elijah analyzes everything he's doing; I could almost feel his self-satisfied nod at his enigmatic response to Jason as he leaves the music store.

Speaking of the music store, one of my favorite moments: ... it’s how he feels, and recognizing that is exhilarating. “I hate Country.”

AHAHAH. Oh, Lij. So sweet and innocent.

I'm worried about the Veronica story, though. =( Don't believe her, Lij! Wait 'til Orli gets home, he'll show you a rockin' time!

Wheee I love this story. Your characters are so.. well, realistic. HA I feel so clever! But that's probably because I'm still kind of sick and also it's like three in the morning; perhaps I will not feel so proud of my witty pun tomorrow.

<3 you! I hope you are well, darling. =)

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theartoffic February 21 2009, 15:46:04 UTC
hee! Elijah is innocent despite how long he has been in the world. i love your pun! It's perfect, and I'm so glad that you do find them real! I'd hate for them to be flat or boring!

I am well and I hope you feel better soon! *hugs* <3's

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syllamon February 21 2009, 20:05:03 UTC
Sigh.. I love Lij's vulnerability and innocence. The last conversation with Orli was so awkward and real and heartbreaking.. loved it.. can't wait for Orli to come home.

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syllamon February 21 2009, 20:07:41 UTC
sigh..... I love Lij's vulnerability and innocence - and the last conversation with him and Orli, so real and awkward and heartbreaking. Can't wait for Orli to come home.

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theartoffic February 22 2009, 05:09:20 UTC
hee! Elijah can't wait either! Poor Lij, he's been around a long time and there is still so much he doesn't know. *hugs* :D

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itstonedme February 22 2009, 06:12:43 UTC
I love the selflessness of how they care for each other, how Orlando's generosity is painful yet unavoidable. Another fabulous chapter. *awaits the next one enthusiastically.*

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theartoffic February 23 2009, 04:18:36 UTC
*adores* I won't make you prod me for the chapter either hehehe ;) *hugs*

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cara_dee February 23 2009, 22:29:35 UTC
Just started reading this fic, and I must say Orlijah isn't really my thing but boy do you pull it off well. I love it. I'm in love with your Elijah, and your Orlando as well. (And I really like your Billy and Dom, love them actually. Dom is so helpful. :D)

Anyway, this was a amazing chapter. Love Jason already (Esp. If you see him as Charlie Hunnam.) And how tender Elijah and Orlando are with each other really get me. I will be stalking you. Can't wait for the next update. :)

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theartoffic February 24 2009, 05:49:20 UTC
Aww, I'm so glad you're enjoying it! Glad you like the characters. :D I may write an AU of my AU :P where Jason and Elijah hook up cos yisss, Charlie ... like he looked in Undeclared or Abandon! *happy happy thoughts in my head right now*

Next update coming soon! *hugs* :D

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