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Realistic Chapter 10 :)

Mar 05, 2009 21:21

Title: Realistic - Chapter 10/14
Author: theartoffic
Type: LOTR RPS AU
Pairing: Orlando/Elijah
Rating: Adult

Summary: In the 21st century Artificial Intelligence is still in its infancy, some scientists toy with the idea of creating robots that look, and act, and think like human beings; in the future they are going to succeed. Realistics look real, feel ( Read more... )

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Comments 34

jillian1127 March 6 2009, 13:16:13 UTC

Another great chapter! I love how their relationship is developing-they are so sweet with each other! I was worried during the testing and so glad that Orlando stayed with Elijah the whole time-their life together is so wonderful, but the outside world can be so dangerous for them. You've really got me spellbound with this fic! Thanks!

theartoffic March 6 2009, 15:32:01 UTC

Orlando wouldn't let Elijah out of his sight in the Company, not after Elijah told him his fears. Such a good Orlando! I'm really glad you're enjoying it!!! *hugs* :D

vienna80er March 6 2009, 17:45:58 UTC

I'm so happy with the ending of this chapter. Unfortunately I can't get rid of the feeling in my gut, that there's something bad coming along, maybe Veronica will return? I don't know. Anyway I'm very much looking forward to more. :D

theartoffic March 7 2009, 01:44:27 UTC

*waggly brows of suspense* ;) I'm so glad you're enjoying it! *hugs* :D

itstonedme March 7 2009, 16:59:11 UTC

There we were yesterday, chatting up a storm, and I didn't even know you'd posted!

I tell you, I was so afraid that Elijah was going to be wiped clean in the factory visit. How fragile a thing is memory.

Wow and bravo. This is an exceptional series.

theartoffic March 7 2009, 22:23:19 UTC

heh, I like it to be a surprise *g*. Can you imagine if he had been wiped clean then ... no memories of anything? *sad*. But he'd never allow that. I'm so glad you're still enjoying it :D. *hugs*

verangel March 7 2009, 17:27:51 UTC

I am so glad Elijah asked Orli about Veronica. Still wondering what the ring thing was but the whole thing with the phone calls he ignored and the sister screaming at him...hee...oh well, happy for Elijah! Punched in the gut...*whimpers* You add these little touches that show the abuse he has taken ( ... )

theartoffic March 7 2009, 22:50:15 UTC

The ring was something Veronica had give Orlando as a keepsake. It hadn't mattered to him so he didn't think to take it off. Of course it mattered to Elijah *pets him* Elijah is so very happy and I am too! So happy that you're enjoying it! *hugs you* More soon! :D <3

theartoffic March 17 2009, 02:05:31 UTC

omg, forget what i wrote to you about the ring. I? Am a dumbass! *snorts* I also changed the story since and, well, it's been so long I forgot that I changed the bit about the ring. You'll find out as soon as I post this next part. (I'm working on it now *g*) lols @ self! :P

verangel March 17 2009, 02:41:54 UTC

I am just going by the story you posted. I never knew anything else about the ring. I was just as curious and annoyed as Elijah was about that thing dangling from his neck. He got rid of it this last chapter. It was probably something he took from veronica and said he would wear it around his neck...knowing it would be gone, soon. But, I was curious. You aren't a dumbass. The story is seamless and wonderful. I can't wait for more. SERIOUSLY! hugs you so close xoxoxo v

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honeyandvinegar March 9 2009, 13:03:27 UTC

I got all worried when they requested a "routine" exam. I kept thinking, "zomg, they're gonna find out that Lij is, like, all sorts of independent and they won't WANT thta and and and..." Billy annoyed me, too. But Dom was sweet.

Wonderful job! Now, do more. Now. *waits*!

theartoffic March 9 2009, 15:22:40 UTC

hehehe! Elijah was worried too! More soon! *hugs & squishes* :D