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theartoffic

Realistic Chapter 11

Mar 16, 2009 22:27

And we're finally getting closer to the end of this story ;)

Title: Realistic - Chapter 11/14
Author: theartoffic
Type: LOTR RPS AU
Pairing: Orlando/Elijah
Rating: Adult

Summary: In the 21st century Artificial Intelligence is still in its infancy, some scientists toy with the idea of creating robots that look, and act, and think like human beings; in the ( Read more... )

realistic

Comments 34

verangel March 21 2009, 04:12:45 UTC

Sometimes I wish I would just say...it was absolutely fantastic and I loved it and could leave it there. I couldn't so I didn't reply, read it at work left it with markups of love at work (thank god turned upside down since I had to stay home with sick child the next day). I hate excuses, especially when I read something like this. I have had a few glasses a wine, have confirmation practice and confirmation on Sunday for my middle sweetheart (14 ( ... )

theartoffic March 21 2009, 04:27:05 UTC

zomg honey! I knew you were just busy or something! I'm glad you left the story face down too hehehehhe. awww confirmation! you're going to have a busy weekend!

I am so, so very glad you liked it! And your feedback ... you've no idea what it means to me to have you take me through it as you read it. There is really nothing like it! You are so special to me!!! And because of that I'm going to tell you two things. First, I'm pretty much posting the rest of this story this weekend. I'm still up now cos I'm getting chapter 12 ready to post. And Second, you might want to wait until it's all posted to finish reading it. I don't want you to hate me *g*.

So you'll have it all way before your trip! Florida! You lucky girl!! I hope that the weather is wonderful for you! and you get to relax!

Okay, I'm going to go post chapter 12 now. <3's omg.

verangel March 21 2009, 13:42:15 UTC

You're going to hurt me on this one aren't you!? Evil Paul is going to strike and abuse poor Elijah? I may peak at a few comments before I read. hugs you. much loves xoxoxo v

theartoffic March 21 2009, 14:35:55 UTC

errr probably but ... well, you'll see ;) I swear, I'll make it all better in the end tho *loves*

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mother2012 March 25 2009, 22:54:59 UTC

my sister and her two little girls are on one side of you and Ron’s grandma is on the other

Seems only right.

But he wonders how long Orlando’s forever will be.

So do I. Does Orlando have a trick up his sleeve?

This is so good. You seem to enjoy an Elijah who is completely special but at Orlando's mercy. Works for me.

theartoffic March 28 2009, 02:41:51 UTC

but at Orlando's mercy.
completely at Orlando's mercy *pervs*. I guess I do have a them running lol :D I can't help myself *g*. I'm glad it works for you too hehehhe *hugs*

ladybugkay March 28 2009, 04:01:11 UTC

Orlando's forever...hmm....

Also, I love that the ring turned out to be his gift to Elijah, his promise writ in precious metal.

theartoffic March 29 2009, 15:12:29 UTC

heh, Elijah was all worked up for nothing *g*. He wanted to give something to Elijah that would carry him through what is coming. ;)

layne67 June 10 2009, 06:57:06 UTC

Uncle Paul is the creeps indeed, and I thought he was a good man! Well, maybe he still is but only with people. Poor Elijah! And Orli going on saying that he has something to tell Elijah right after that, well, it put me on edge too!

And now I'm kinda anxious to find out about Orli's family ...

Another wonderful chapter :)

theartoffic June 17 2009, 14:32:14 UTC

heheheh yeah, he is a creep! He has no respect for what he considers a machine :(. Thank you for reading and I'm sorry it's taken me so long to reply! I have some catching up to do :P. *hugs*