Realistic Chapter 13

Mar 21, 2009 22:20

Because I couldn't keep you waiting! :)

Title: Realistic - Chapter 13/14
Author: theartoffic
Type: LOTR RPS AU
Pairing: Orlando/Elijah
Rating: Adult

Summary: In the 21st century Artificial Intelligence is still in its infancy, some scientists toy with the idea of creating robots that look, and act, and think like human beings; in the future they are going ( Read more... )

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honeyandvinegar March 22 2009, 03:05:14 UTC
I KNEW IT! Somehow I KNEW it, not just that Orli wasn't dead, but there was a twist to it. But wowee-zowee, whatta twist! Oh hon, this was worth staying up later for! What a beautiful story. I suppose the epilogue will be fluffy-nummy-cocoa-buttery, right??

Dom pushes the intercom button. “Ah, hello? This is Dominic Monahan. I’m here with your Realistic.”

He thinks Dom may as well have said 'I’m here with your pizza'.

Just saying that that one got to me, it did.

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theartoffic March 22 2009, 03:33:47 UTC
I forgot to say in my other comment ... Welcome back!! :D Yis, I think the epi is nice and fluffy :D. I was afraid the twist might be too lame but that's what the muses wanted and you know how they are ;). I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Has Pan updated his robofic yet? *impatient*

*hugs and adores*

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honeyandvinegar March 22 2009, 12:19:40 UTC
No, he hasn't. I must start cracking the whip!! He'll be posting it in jacked_up when it's ready. :)!

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verangel March 22 2009, 14:58:17 UTC
I agree...I didn't give him feedback (It was a bad week) but I LOVED that story. I think the eunuch won't be one much longer. hugs xoxoox v

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bed4good March 22 2009, 03:28:59 UTC
It's a good thing you posted these new chapters cause chapter 12 was about to give me a meltdown. lol

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theartoffic March 22 2009, 03:35:49 UTC
yeah, I couldn't just leave that chapter hanging out there too long. I couldn't have stood it as a reader *g*. I'm waaaaay too impatient. Thank you so much for reading! :D *hugs*

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theartoffic March 22 2009, 03:47:39 UTC
oh phew! I'm so glad it was worth staying up for and that I made up for that last chapter. :) I tried for hints because I didn't want it to come completely out of left field, but Elijah never caught on or suspected. I'm so happy you enjoyed it!!! *hugs* <3

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syllamon March 22 2009, 05:23:48 UTC
Hey.. very nice twist.. making Orli a realistic I really didnt see that coming.. thought it would be Paul and more angst until Orli came back from the dead. Great job on this as usual. Lij is soooo sweet and real and huggable.

A comment on your comment about SPN.. quite frankly it would be great if you got into that fandom and wanted to write some Sam and Dean stuff I would love it. Love the show, the old monster a week thing and the new mytharc world ending apocalypse stuff. Seriously, rent the first season and you'll be hooked.

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theartoffic March 23 2009, 01:15:59 UTC
I was afraid the fact of what Orli was would be too apparent so I'm glad it was a twist for you :D. I couldn't let Elijah go through another nasty owner *g*.

Heh, you know, it's funny because I watched the first 3 spn eps but it just didn't grab me. But there is nothing bloody on tv that I want to watch! (well, except for Sons but the wait for that is killing me!) Anyway, it's all teh pics of Jared and Jensen - man, their bodies are just too perfect! So, who knows, I might weaken :D.

How have you been? Are you writing some Sam/Dean?? *hugs*

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syllamon March 24 2009, 04:17:45 UTC
Been busy but not too... I have written some Sam/Dean but nothing worthy of a post. Mostly I've been working on reg fic. am taking a class and its work lemme tell ya. As for spn, I am not a horror fan per say, I couldnt bring myself to go see slasher films the boys were in. Bad fan I know. But I love the brother interaction on the show, which is much more prevalent in season 2. And no one cries better on tv than Jensen Ackles.. he is awesome.
And.. when is Sons coming back?? Is it coming back? hope so. Great to hear from you.

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theartoffic March 24 2009, 15:13:49 UTC
awww, yeah, school is hard work! You're still working on you plays yes?

The horror aspect doesn't bother me *g*. The (usually) bad special effects do heh. I know I've heard(read) grumblings about this season and last and the brother's relationship. (see how much I know about this show and I don't even watch it?) :D. I just know that reading Arabia's fics has given me a soft spot for these two and that's usually how it starts. ;)

Sons is due back this fall! I can't wait! Henry Rawlins has been cast to be on it too and he should tear it up. I love the show so much and not just because Charlie is on it *g* (although I'm missing seeing his faaaaaaaace. I need to re-watch the season) :D.

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verangel March 22 2009, 06:39:39 UTC
I fell asleep on the couch watching a movie and was left there. I woke and t hought I would check to see if you had posted this...and you did!!! It may be early morning for me now but I am reading it. Comment to come later. hugs you xoxoxo v

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theartoffic March 23 2009, 01:17:00 UTC
*hugs omguh* I couldn't leave you waiting and I knew I wasn't going to be around most of today either! I hope you liked it v!!! *HUGS*

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