Oh shit just noticed the want of constructiveness. Oops.
Naomi should pop Alfons a bullet to the gut. Then go on the run with Emily. But then, WHAM, Alfons didn't die when she shot him, and now he has a personal vendetta.
More collective crap in my head:D
Whacking Katie then? If not help me imagine a Katie that lives in this era. My heads having trouble:(
Emily & Katie are rebels? :o that's cool if that's how it will be!
If Naomi hates Alfon for some of those reasons that she said, she must hate herself then?
How was Emily superior? she only saw her for a moment, I thought that was weird...but then again the whole superior race crap is well, crap
What I didn't like was the german language, my brain annoyingly sees "adkghsdg" before it gets to the translation and then there was one part that I didn't get “Alfons, Recht hier.” is that 'right here'?
Emily, well obviously isn't superior, (i don't like that mindset), but to Naomi, she's confusing admiration, or infatuation with the thought of 'better'. So yeah.
Yeah, i think i'm just gonna stick to the language i know. so no more german. WOOT
Ooh, isn't this intriguing. I really hope you continue and expand it, because I'd love to read more.
But like, for re re. Naomi as an SS Officer and Emily as the persuasive lesbian jew who teaches her that racial hatred is silly, and vagina is wonderful. Is that what you're doing, or am I just projecting my hopes?
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yeah i'm gonna continue it.
Just trying to map it out I guess.
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I dig the grim vibes.
So happy there will be something completely different from all the other fics.
Speak German?
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Naomi should pop Alfons a bullet to the gut.
Then go on the run with Emily.
But then, WHAM, Alfons didn't die when she shot him, and now he has a personal vendetta.
More collective crap in my head:D
Whacking Katie then? If not help me imagine a Katie that lives in this era. My heads having trouble:(
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And danke (<-- that is german. WOOHOO)
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Emily & Katie are rebels? :o that's cool if that's how it will be!
If Naomi hates Alfon for some of those reasons that she said, she must hate herself then?
How was Emily superior? she only saw her for a moment, I thought that was weird...but then again the whole superior race crap is well, crap
What I didn't like was the german language, my brain annoyingly sees "adkghsdg" before it gets to the translation and then there was one part that I didn't get “Alfons, Recht hier.” is that 'right here'?
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Emily, well obviously isn't superior, (i don't like that mindset), but to Naomi, she's confusing admiration, or infatuation with the thought of 'better'. So yeah.
Yeah, i think i'm just gonna stick to the language i know. so no more german. WOOT
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But like, for re re. Naomi as an SS Officer and Emily as the persuasive lesbian jew who teaches her that racial hatred is silly, and vagina is wonderful. Is that what you're doing, or am I just projecting my hopes?
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/xena
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That pretty much sums it up in possibly the most awesome sentence ever written.
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