Broken Collar: Chapter Two

[theatregirl7299]

Title:> Broken Collar: Chapter Two
Author: theatregirl7299
Artist: kanarek13
Fandom: White Collar
Characters/Pairings: Neal/Peter, Peter/David Siegel (Past), Neal/Jones (Past), Elizabeth, Mozzie, Blake
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 7,184 so far, This part - 2692
Spoilers: None
Beta Credit: miri_thompson, and firesign10.
Warnings: BDSM themes, Non-major character suicide
Summary: Peter

Comments

[elrhiarhodan]

OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!

This is so brilliant and beautiful.

I am flailing and flailing and flailing - seriously, you've written the perfect story for me.

HUGS YOU SO TIGHTLY!!!!!!!!!!!

Thank you - seriously - I'm speechless. I need to re-read and form some coherent thoughts because... omg this is world class awesome.

[theatregirl7299]

I am so happy you liked it! It has been a labor of love between Olena and myself. And I promise there will be more to come.

[sasha_dragon]

And now we meet Neal! I loved your description of the club and the use of different coloured bracelets to denote specific kinks.

I enjoyed the sense of longing in Neal, his desire to be Peter's sub and how seeing Peter had spoiled him for other Dom's. Those two really need to meet they are perfect for one another!

I look forward to seeing ore of this, it's an enthralling story and the art is simply amazing.

[theatregirl7299]

Thank you again. And yes, the Art is incredible and there is alot more that'll be showcased in future chapters. Kanarek is amazing and we are so lucky to have her.

[palombaggia]

Afskfsk.
I just passed by on LJ, you know because it still feels like home to me.
And I discover this little gem.
Waow.
This is exactly what I needed tonight.
Awesome.
And the art is amazing.
Hugs.💖

[theatregirl7299]

Thank you!!! And I know - Olena is fantastic. Go see her post - there are a few other pictures that will be used in future chapters.

[sherylyn]

Ooooh. My. Heck.

There aren't proper words for this, honestly. I had to see what you'd been working on with Olena, and for Elr's b'day, and geeeeeez!! You did an unbelievably amazing job on this, and it's not an easy one, and....GAH!!!!

Seriously. Words fail here. o.O WOW!!

[theatregirl7299]

Thank you!!!!! It's been a journey. Glad you like it.

[sherylyn]

LOL I'm sure it has!! I'm looking forward to where you're going from here :-)

[theatregirl7299]

Thank you!

[riverotter1951]

This is marvelous. I am looking forward to future chapters.

[theatregirl7299]

Thank you!!