Forever (and the Reasons Why We Fall In Place)

Jan 29, 2014 06:46

Title: Forever (and the Reasons Why We Fall In Place)
Author: Anonymous until 1/30/14
For: sweet_mintx
Pairing: Baekhyun/Chanyeol
Word Count: 9,470
Summary: It doesn't matter how far apart they are, when they've imprinted themselves on each other's soul.
Warnings: Swearing
Rating: PG-13

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pairing: baekhyun/chanyeol, this is breakfast, rating: pg-13

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Comments 13

digindeeper January 30 2014, 11:42:43 UTC
oh wow. this was such a rollercoaster of emotions. i like how it ended though. :D

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digindeeper January 30 2014, 11:43:07 UTC
also yes, i started bawling about 2 minutes in. :D

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airplanewishes January 30 2014, 12:19:09 UTC
Oh my goodness, how beautiful is this fic! A lot beautiful! The confession scene broke me, Baekhyun trying to hold on to what he and Chanyeol have, while Chanyeol and his belief that they will always have each other no matter what. ;w; That thought is just so beautiful to me. This kind of love really seems like forever, everlasting and knows no bounds. It's so much more than just romantic love. Aaah I don't know what to say. I feel so much but I don't know how to put it into words. This is amazing. You're amazing.

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aiuyu January 30 2014, 23:18:07 UTC
My thoughts are so jumbled up and incoherent right now. Mostly because your writing is so masterful it takes my breath away. I am pretty sure I know who wrote this because the style is just so distinct from the rest that its so easy to pick out.
But anyways just wow. I really love the fireworks metaphor and how they bumped into each other and baek is the one getting hurt. It kinda foreshadows what happens later in the story.
The way you just write this story with such lucid and vivid imagery tied with effortless analogies is absolutely transcending and I want to thank you so much for writing this fic because bravo very well done!!!

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for_you_i_am January 30 2014, 23:52:04 UTC
AHHH this was so so so beautiful - sad, but ultimately hopeful. And I want to marry every single sentence, because you have a talent with words I could only dream of.

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sweet_mintx February 4 2014, 05:11:36 UTC
SO I FINALLY GOT TO READ THIS.
AND I'M LIKE SUPER TIRED RIGHT NOW.
BUT IM CRYING OH MY GOD THIS WAS SO AMAZING WHYYYY

i would tell you my favorite lines BUT THEN I'D HAVE TO QUOTE THE ENTIRE FIC AND
UGH
THIS WAS SO GREAT.

;A;

i don't even know what to say oh my freaking god i adored the way you wrote chanyeol and how you played with the past and the present and just EVERYTHING WAS SO AMAZING.

AND YOUR WRITING.
it's perfect.

THERE'S NO OTHER WAY TO DESCRIBE IT???

I'm totally re-reading this soon /cry cry cry cry ;A;

Thank you so much for this story! It was so amazing and it was everything I could ever have wanted and /SOBS SOBS THANK YOU SO MUCH. I LOVE YOU.

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