En Flambé: a Joker poem

[thebetch]

Title: En Flambé
Author:

Comments

[ladybugkay]

That would be a bitch to write! Yet it's also a pretty perfect format for the Joker's thoughts, what with all the twisting insanity and the obsessive nature of his thoughts. It works. Definitely.

[thebetch]

Haha yeah... I went nuts doing this. Completely lost track of how to make words flow because I was worried about the structure. Which is why... I don't DO formatted poetry.

:D I'm glad it works for Joker though. There was no way I could really get a cohesive piece of anything from it otherwise.

Thanks for reading (and I'm sorry this took so long to reply to. I'm on spring break and that means I'm flighty.)

[saavikam77]

Ouch! This must have been a nightmare.

And fantastic! Really captured the Joker's insanity.

[thebetch]

Yeah, it pretty much was a nightmare, but it turned out alright. Got the desired effect. Using Joker's insanity as an excuse for my poem not making sense xD.

Thanks for reading and commenting!

[roxymissrose]

I'm sure it was hard to write but it was worth it. I think you've captured the sticky twisty way the Joker's mind runs. Lovely!

[thebetch]

Thank you so much! With a sestina, which never make sense to me at any point, Joker actually seems to have some sort of methodology to his thoughts... Which amuses me.

I think the poem doesn't make sense, but it's Joker's trains of thought so... it doesn't have to!

[anonymous]

beautiful; in a creepy sick sorta way =)
matches his personality perfectly

[dariclone]

*claps* Very good!