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thebigdisaster

Fanfiction: You Make My Heart Bleed

Jun 07, 2011 14:28

Title: You Make My Heart Bleed
Disclaimer:I don’t own anything about TVD. If I did, well things would have progressed far differently.
Rating: M or hard R
Fandom: The Vampire Diaries
Pairing: Jeremy Gilbert/Tyler Lockwood
Word Count: 5,332
Summary: What do you do when you just can’t anymore? What do you do when you love someone so much and they ( Read more... )

fandom: the vampire diaries, character: jeremy gilbert, character: tyler lockwood, rated: m, pairing: jeremy/tyler, fanfiction: one-shot

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thebigdisaster June 16 2011, 11:50:37 UTC

The only reason the angst and verbal banter was spot on was because of you. You walked me through this, held my hand, and just completely stood by my side through it all. I completely love you for it. I'm plowing through the prequel. We shall she how people react to that one. And no need to worry my dear. There will be a very pivotal scene in the sequel where that happens.

ruleto June 7 2011, 23:51:21 UTC

Wow, that was wow. Lovely & painful. Where you a fly on the wall during my last breakup lol? It's almost spot on except I didnt go to italy.

thebigdisaster June 9 2011, 08:33:37 UTC

I'm glad you liked it!!! Thank you so much for your feedback. I'll message you when the prequel is up in two weeks.

mind_detonator June 8 2011, 03:29:54 UTC

He bit Tyler’s lip and sucked on it to soothe the bite. *gets ideas*

Seriously though, THIS CAN'T BE A ONE SHOT! I want to know what happens!

I've said it once and I'll say it again, you're an exceptionally talented writer!

thebigdisaster June 9 2011, 10:32:37 UTC

Not exactly a one shot. There's a prequel coming in two weeks and a sequel coming in four. So you should get to read more soon. Plus you're my twin so I'll send you advance snippets!! And thank you for the compliments.

black_phoenix June 8 2011, 04:24:53 UTC

This is really beautiful.

thebigdisaster June 9 2011, 10:33:12 UTC

Thank you so much! I'll pm you when the prequel is up if you want.

brite_city June 8 2011, 21:36:39 UTC

This was so amazing. Their personalities are so spot-on, especially Jeremy's willingness to be all in and Tyler being so reluctant.

thebigdisaster June 9 2011, 10:34:15 UTC

OMG thank you! But really my beta is a million percent responsible for that resonance. He made me rework and rework and REWORK it until it sounded perfect. I'll pm you when the prequel is up.