Fanfiction: You Make My Heart Bleed

[thebigdisaster]

Title: You Make My Heart Bleed
Disclaimer:I don’t own anything about TVD. If I did, well things would have progressed far differently.
Rating: M or hard R
Fandom: The Vampire Diaries
Pairing: Jeremy Gilbert/Tyler Lockwood
Word Count: 5,332
Summary: What do you do when you just can’t anymore? What do you do when you love someone so much and they

Comments

[bristol_man]

A good read, but your text size is way too small. Larger printing please.

[_touched]

Okay, I have to say that I love the angsty verbal banter between these two. I don't necessarily ship them, but I really did enjoy reading this. It sort of made me want to start shipping them. It was very well written and I like the canon that you used - you managed to spin a story of love between these two and keep both Tyler and Jeremy very much in character and that's hard to do when writing fan fiction.

I loved it, in short. :)

wow

[so_dalaric]

i abosulty love this story i cannot wait for more, it captured them soo well, tyler being himself cant bring himself to be gay and admit what he turly wants i wonder how hes gna take it jer being gone and all hopfully he'll relise sumthing and not slept with any1 till he sees jer again or sumthing, jer finally had the bulls to actually leave cuz yeah it wasnt fair on him what ty was doing to him i wld have left aswell, ur writing is abouslity amazing i cannot wait to read more by you and i was reading this i was like wow cant wait for more ur talented and a very awesome writer, wish i cld do a fanatisic job with my writing fic as u do. u inspire me :) love it :) and wow amazing job

[deathly_smirk]

Oh Lord. What an emotional rollercoaster!

Absolutley fantastic. Thnk you for writing and sharing :)

[oxo_katty_oxo]

Ahh this was so amazing and heart breaking!
I really loved it and can't wait for the sequel and prequel :D