Comments | thebluerose: One last go at the Swan image before I try the Session 2

thebluerose

One last go at the Swan image before I try the Session 2

Jul 25, 2015 16:41

My editing process is blogged here at LensaddictionI wasn't overly happy with my first go, and this is still not as good as my fantail but improved in different ways and more importantly was a good learning experience. I am getting better about judging the effect of textures and much more aware of the impact both color and TONE have when ( Read more... )

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kk1raven July 26 2015, 15:56:12 UTC

I like this one too, but it feels a little off-balance to me. If I'd created it, I think I'd have either moved the swans up so that they weren't centered top-to-bottom, or moved them to the right so that they were centered both right-to-left and top-to-bottom. Having them more-or-less centered top-to-bottom but not left-to-right bothers me.

thebluerose July 26 2015, 21:20:06 UTC

Its a good point, the reason its like that is in the original style that I was using, she put a frame around the center part but removed part of the frame so the left edge of the image spilled out of it.

I set mine up like that but went in another direction with the framing and so you have it as it is. Excellent feedback, thanks :)