this is deffinitely a good start for a series and I can't wait to read more. The flow is very smooth and the only things I can comment to be a shame is that there wasn't more....*g* I guess I just have to wait. ;)
It's a little short I knowjinxeffectJune 8 2005, 14:47:58 UTC
It could possibly be the shortest thing I've ever written lol but basically these 'episodes' are just setting up the premise of introducing William as a character and establishing their history but I have to pace myself since this storyverse is going to merge into canon, I don't want to get ahead of myself and half to backtrack lol. So I'm trying to stretch it out a bit so that hopefully the series will have an episode or two for me to work with lol but as it hasn't even aired yet lol it's a magic trick to juggle the timing lol. I hope I don't drop what I'm juggling though lol. ((Plus if the series really isn't that good, it will give me time to do some creative writing and FIX it lol))
The Bone Yard: ContagionkrjembJune 8 2005, 21:37:29 UTC
This was really good. I checked Fox's website and Bones doesn't look like its due to premiere until the fall. Why did it have to be Baltimore Penn station? I take the train between Baltimore and DC. It cuts a little too close to home.
Re: The Bone Yard: ContagionjinxeffectJune 8 2005, 21:42:24 UTC
Oh Noooooooo! Sorry! I chose it because East Coast or West Coast most people recognbize the name and I thought Grand Central was just a bit oo big of a stage for an opener but I can definitely promise you don't have to worry about the icky bugs! I didn't want to make people too uncomfortable so I sort of glossed over the where and didn't give many details about the place itself. *gives lots of pets and cuddles* Sorry about the knick :S
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