FIC: Walk Through Hell
Title: Walk Through Hell - Prologue
Pairing: Demi Lovato/Selena Gomez
Summary: Angst. In the back of her mind, in that dark, secret place where she let her own insecurities roam unseen and unchecked, Selena knew that Demi would eventually move on without her.
Disclaimer: THEY ARE NOT MINE. OBVIOUSLY. THIS IS A WORK OF FICTION. If they were, sexy ( Read more... )
Pairing: Demi Lovato/Selena Gomez
Summary: Angst. In the back of her mind, in that dark, secret place where she let her own insecurities roam unseen and unchecked, Selena knew that Demi would eventually move on without her.
Disclaimer: THEY ARE NOT MINE. OBVIOUSLY. THIS IS A WORK OF FICTION. If they were, sexy ( Read more... )
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DUDE, FO SRS, I WAS USING DISMANTLE/REPAIR BY ANBERLIN AS INSPIRATION FOR MY ANGST FIC AND I AM FREAKING OUT, EVEN THOUGH I SHOULDN'T B CUZ ITS AN INSPIRING SONG AND OF COURSE OTHER WRITERS CAN USE IT BUT OMG IF YOU ARE THE SHEEP LADY I THINK WE HAVE THE START OF A BEAUTIFUL FRIENDSHIP HERE. ZOMG
OK, NOW THAT THATS TAKEN CARE OF, I WILL CONTINUE TO READ.
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I HAD ANOTHER LINE THERE, BUT THEN I WAS LISTENING TO THE SONG, AND I COULDN'T HELP BUT CHANGE IT. IT JUST POPPED IN. I THINK WE CHOOSE IT BECAUSE IT HAS THE POTENTIAL TO BE FAIRLY ANGSTY, ESPECIALLY IN THE VERSES, BUT THEN IT HAS A BRIGHTER OVERTONE THAT PROMISES RESOLUTION.
(AND IT'S FATE. YOU CAN'T DENY FATE.)
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Exatly, which is why i idnt use it for the beginning of my angst fic. I couldnt have that glimmer of hope so early into the story. but i still might use it towards the end.... *thinking*
Fate is what me make it. foshop *sarah connor ftw omg!!!*
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WHY ARE YOU SO AMAZING? YOUR METAPHORS KICK ME IN THE HEAD AND LEAVE ME BEGGING FOR MORE PUNISHMENT.
there was almost a physical hook sticking out of each of their backs, tugging gently, whenever the other was away.
WHAT? WHAAAAT??? THAT IS SO AMAZING, A PERFECT DESCRIPTION, GOOD LORD I AM I AWE.
Selena, the sun that was once the center of Demi's gravitational pull could only wait until Demi orbited back into her system.
*IS CRYING FROM THE BEAUTY*
I NOW PROCLAIM US SOULMATES. MY WIFE WILL KILL ME WHEN SHE DISCOVERS THIS, BUT ITS ALL RIGHT. WE DIVORCE LIKE, EVERY OTHER WEEKEND. S'COOL.
GOD, YOU! I JUST - GAH, I CANT EVEN!- !!!!- *DIES*
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*blushes*
(S&M?)
WELL.
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:D
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*RESISTS THE URGE TO MAKE A TWILIGHT METAPHOR*
I LOVE YOU.
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The last couple lines really cut to the quick, and really make you feel for Selena. ('cause, you know, the ENTIRE FIC doesn't have that same effect or anything ;)
Awesome job (UNDERSTATEMENT)
Gah. I feel like any comment I leave is horribly insufficient. :)
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When it was serious, it was almost always Selena's fault. And she knew. She knew all too well that every jagged line that danced across Demi's wrists, every broken guitar string, and every miscalculated relationship was in some way, her fault. If she just could have broken through to her sooner, if she just could have saved her, if she just could have confessed the feelings that tore her own soul to shreds. I feel like that captures so well the essence of Selena: she puts Demi back together time and again but blames herself for being unable to keep Demi from falling apart to begin with. Poor child.
In the back of her mind, in that dark, secret place where she let her own insecurities roam unseen and unchecked, Selena knew that Demi would eventually move on without her. This snapped my heart in half, because that's what seemed to be happening over ( ... )
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