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Aug 18, 2004 03:12

every petal fell into the river in 4/4 time, swimming and hissing like newly lit matches ( Read more... )

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dani5248 August 18 2004, 08:30:33 UTC
b-e-a-utiful.

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anonymous August 19 2004, 09:15:37 UTC
she loves you...

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anonymous August 23 2004, 08:18:03 UTC
You're blind.

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WOOOWWWWWEEEE eversohsweeet August 19 2004, 15:07:33 UTC
Eli, I can't even put into words how beautiful that was. It's insane. Your writing is so amazing in every single way. I love it. Write a book for me. It's so discriptive in the best ways that ugh, is just so AWESOME It drives me nuts!!! (ugh as in a good way like if u see a sweet car and yer like, "ugh, I want that.") Haha. Awe. You're the best! I heart you.

ex oh ex oh
<3mer*

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anonymous August 19 2004, 15:45:20 UTC
I'm not leaving a comment because you told me to but because I want to. I usually don't like to post on this, but this entry was without a doubt worthy of praise. While reading this it proved to be both intriguing, mysterious and really let your mind place you in the setting of these two lovers, it was imagery well used. It was beautiful but not in the sense of hallmark, in the sense of unique, orignial poetry and it deserves to be appolauded. So from one poet to another, kudos.

<3 you <3 me.

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eliiii<3 counthestars09 August 19 2004, 21:01:21 UTC
hello eli:-)
thats a lovely entry
i can't wait to see a show of yours
we have to hang out too....soon:-)
lets plan something!
.....if you want that is haha
<3<3

_Mariesaaaa

oh yeah...casey is treating me well...(from your post on my journal) haha

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