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theburialplot

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Oct 08, 2004 20:44

we hunt the things that we let out of the cage. call it sport, but the bite marks leave a promise. we bought the things they swore would camouflage our age. call it botox, but our smiles are set in granite ( Read more... )

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kitttyeatworld October 8 2004, 20:53:35 UTC

This line:
true love got lost somewhere in between the sheets and mattress. you
TOOO...This line:
don't have to like it, baby, it's your job.
Equals true brilliance.
::applauds::
the rest was pretty good..i just loved the middle though. yet another good one.

sosimplycomplex October 8 2004, 21:50:45 UTC

Well done eli, very well done.
Where do you come up with this?
I love it. Keep them coming.
<3kaylee

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sosimplycomplex October 14 2004, 16:11:52 UTC

You really do think too much sometimes, ha ha.
But it makes your writing amazing, so it's okay.
<3Kaylee
Eeek! I hate clowns. Not nice EliASS.

andya55555 October 9 2004, 06:41:57 UTC

I don't know why I'd bother commenting when it seems that you don't reply to them, but I'd just like to say...

I always appreciate creative writing. Props to you.

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andya55555 October 13 2004, 14:21:44 UTC

Oh, well, I wasn't really referring to a comment made by me.. I just meant in general. But that's okay, so don't feel bad.

As for coming here, whenever you get a chance. You're always welcome.

anonymous October 9 2004, 10:34:53 UTC

wow, that is really good. see you at the show later.
felecia

anonymous October 9 2004, 12:14:06 UTC

My comments got old.

Yours Truly-
Kelly Marie Fronczak