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dear lilian, the absolute heroic triumph of theatre over television, prompting the waving of new flags and stamping of fresh headlines, my first and last blindfolded gallop into the traffic of our southern highway and the sound of a cigarette being sucked through deep red lips
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once again, i wish i wrote like you.
you can tell by the look on this outpatient face that i'd sell both my hands for your busy embrace. i stared down on you and my bristled sadness swept away the folds in the sheets and the rouge off of your cheeks as you dreamt of your sleep. breathing like a ballroom waltz, i danced with your ghost but was burdened by my feet who were eager to leave.
...i miss you so much. i'm going to heaven to build you a beautiful victorian house with a milk-white fence and a porch that faces west, just like you always wanted. i'll sit and watch the sky and wait for you.
please hurry, beautiful. i've never seen the sun set so proud.
...hayden, the strength to my frailty and the stitch in my wound,
i awoke to the sun shining through the window. the doctors said that i've been sleeping for months. i can still feel your tears on my pillow and your kisses on my face, but no one will tell me why i am alone.
where did you go?
now is when i need you most.
undyingly yours,
yours
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lets be friends.
hehe.
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We cn b frends tho
Ha ha.
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Eye Dunt no y u thynk he is urs, butt u r rong, soo shuv it.
y u wan b freindz?
u sem dum, i meen, u caynt evn spel teh letr 1 rite. thts ssad, u no?
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I red thta, adn i BARRFEEDD!!1!11¿eleventyone
we shud b freindz 2 share boifrndz, duhhh
u r rly stoopid. i b soww mch smmaertr k?!!!!1
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I figured I'd try to start a trend here and have my comment have something to do with the entry, haha. I liked it, it had an excellent flow, and I enjoyed it a lot. This seems like it could be drug related, and this Lillian seems like she either was in, or is in a coma, or dead. Overall, it provokes thought, good job, man. I think I'm going to end up re-reading it a few more times, and I'll leave a better post then.
Oh, and I have those Cd's. I'll them to you tomorrow.
Don
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