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Nov 28, 2009 23:51

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youdeservedit November 29 2009, 05:11:08 UTC
Ah- what a strange curse.

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thebutcherbird November 29 2009, 05:14:12 UTC
I truly agree
It seems to serve no purpose
Beyond frustration

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youdeservedit November 29 2009, 05:23:17 UTC
It seems most curses end up this way. Perhaps only to serve as frustration.

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thebutcherbird November 29 2009, 05:25:30 UTC
Well then I suppose
The best defiance need only
Less frustrated minds

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kitschempress November 29 2009, 16:31:16 UTC
Though it may be inconvenient, I must say your poetry is very nice.

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thebutcherbird November 29 2009, 19:53:32 UTC
Oh you flatter me
I think I'm doing poorly
So I'll thank the curse

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aibyoukaonigiri November 29 2009, 21:15:50 UTC
I always thought it was difficult, even being Japanese.

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thebutcherbird November 29 2009, 21:21:12 UTC
I've been called upon
At banquets to recite them
But never composed

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aibyoukaonigiri November 29 2009, 21:24:14 UTC
You mean...you do something similar to this on a regular basis? Then...are you a performer?

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thebutcherbird November 29 2009, 21:26:35 UTC
This humble Mozu
Is a geisha apprentice
In Yokohama

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sapanwood November 29 2009, 21:53:26 UTC
Haiku...?

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thebutcherbird November 29 2009, 22:03:23 UTC
Yes a haiku
Perhaps your mother told you
Of them once before

But thinking of it
I'm not sure how popular
Haiku remains

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sapanwood November 29 2009, 23:20:45 UTC
We studied them a little at school, and we even had to write one. But to talk in haiku must be difficult.

Do you have to count all the syllables?

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thebutcherbird November 30 2009, 00:18:36 UTC
That is the strange thing
I'm not even thinking it
But it comes out right

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