Heartbeat ❦ (1)

[theclockiswrong]

I failed my smut writing, so I'm going to write fluff until I get my confidence back T^T This is an old story I wrote halfway last year… I’ve decided to rewrite and post it :) Inspired by the manga Dolls by Yumiko Kawahara (the concept of the plant dolls) and this photo of Kyuhyun :D The story is a little confusing but you'll gradually understand

Comments

[supercinderelli]

omg am I the first to comment? :))

**excuse me while I sit in front of the computer and refuse to leave until the next part is posted**

[theclockiswrong]

Lol but I haven't written the second part yet D:

[supercinderelli]

then i shall stay here until then.. lolololololol

you write so well idek what to say really <3333

[theclockiswrong]

I'll write it as soon as I can! ^^ Thank you <3

[kyulyn]

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW this is so beautiful dearest Krystle, you're seriously amazing!!!! ;~;
The story flows soooo smoothly, and I am so envious of your choices of words gahhh >____<
poor Kyudoll reminds me of The Little Mermaid in the fairytale... because they both cannot voice out their own feeling for the one they love and because of the unrequited love they have. ;~; I pity Kyudoll so bad ;~;
this is (1) so there's supposed to be a part 2 right????? *anticipating*

happy writing bb, wish you will soon get your mojo back ;)

[theclockiswrong]

Thank you bb ^____^ *motivated* I wrote it out of random, but I guess it's not too bad haha! 3
Ahhh Little Mermaid, yeah T__T It's something like that...
I'll write up part 2 when I'm done with my college assignments today lol.

Thanks for reading bb! And yes, I hope my mojo will stay for a loooong time :D

[mochi_wookie]

lost of words here, coz ur words really beautiful.. :D
please update soon..^_^ really eager to know what happen next..
love love love.. <3333

[theclockiswrong]

Thank you :)))
I'll update soon for sure! ^^

[yukwol]

My heart. It's broken. Why.

[theclockiswrong]

*hands you cellophane tape* :

[ninprime]

EVERYTIME. I READ. YOUR SAD STORY. IMMA GONNA DIE.

SO SAD YET SO GOOD ;_;

agree with lyn, it reminds me for little mermaid story