Negotiations 39

[theconservatory]

Hello, all! Two chapters in one month is probably a record for me. Although, it seems like a year has passed. Here's a nice distraction from the political and democratic hell storm that we're in. Your feedback is always appreciated and fuels the fire. Be well, Plum

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Comments

[kinwad]

Loved it, Plum! So happy you're continuing this fascinating journey w/B&J! And yes, it is a welcome distraction! Stay safe!

[theconservatory]

Hey, there! Thanks for commenting! I missed Randy's thing on 9/18. Dang it. I just saw it on your LJ. :)

[calliesky]

I’m soooo happy 🥰 off to read now

[theconservatory]

Yay! Please let me know your thoughts. Everyone's being really quiet about this chapter... lol

[toto_too514]

I saw this earlier... but saved it as my reward for a very hard work week. Just knowing it was here waiting for me was stress-reducing!

I like how Dill and Justin spent time getting to know each other. I also liked how the whole atmosphere in the room changed when Brian arrived. I like the dynamic of where this is going... with Justin being a bit of a buffer and a calming influence with Dill.

"Brian’s cock is thick and pushy--with an attitude just like his-"

This just made me laugh... I think Brian would approve if he could've read Dill's mind, LOL! And yes, Jeannie was not the picture I wanted in my mind at that point either. Brian is no Tony Nelson! But I like the playful at dig at Justin and his TV watching habits.

And the conversation in the car on the way back from Dill's was pure Brian and Justin. I can just imagine Ted's face at the meeting when Brian made his announcement!

We will continue to be very good and obedient if it gets us more installments... especially since Brian is busy plotting.

[theconservatory]

Hi! Thanks so much for the feedback! I'm glad you're enjoying the direction this is taking. I've been writing so long to get to this point to write this part of the story, and it's really scary to write explicit stuff like this and not hear feedback - good, bad, or ugly. It means a lot to me that you took the time. Made the next scene flow!

[cryforwhat]

I finally caught up with the latest update!

So here is the thing:
Justin interrupted you, “But wait, let me clarify that.
Isn't this supposed to be Justin's POV, so why did he become the third person?

[theconservatory]

Hi, yes, you're correct! I fixed it. I sometimes start a section in one POV and change it midstream. lol.