"Heroes and Villains" - Lost 2,000 word fic challenge

Jan 23, 2008 16:44

Maybe I'm hoping this will make me feel better for not being able to write at the moment. I hope this isn't wrong of me to post first, but who knows when Jess and I will ever get around to posting at the SAME time seeing as she's like 6 hours ahead and I'm sleeping all the time due to sickness. So I'm taking the initiative! We challenged each other ( Read more... )

sawyer, lost, fanfiction

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eponine119 January 24 2008, 03:06:22 UTC
I really, really like this. The idea behind it, and the way it's punctuated with dialogue.

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thecorporeal January 26 2008, 20:10:50 UTC
Thank you so much! It's such an honor to know you like it~! :D And your icon so fits the idea of it, ahaha. Sawyer, the Anti-Hero of the story. <3

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thecorporeal January 26 2008, 20:21:29 UTC
Eep! UHM. You're the master at the Hayden/Gavin! I've only gotten the ideas of their unconventional pairing from you! I LOVE YOURS SO YOU WRITE MORE. :[ Besides, I'll make it up to you one day~ *Will write a Gavin or Bally or crossover fic with Gavin one day, obviously, and it will be dedicated to you?* :D

You might see a lot of different fandoms in my journal, which are all equally important to me, so I can't really apologize but I can warn! XD

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thecorporeal January 28 2008, 19:56:33 UTC
Oh! Thanks for letting me know!! :D

Don't worry about taking any length of time! I'm just happy you wanted to take the time to comment! ;D I'm really glad you liked this and the mixture of Sawyer's fantastic emotions.

You know, speaking of develop, I was pretty sure before I posted this, I was playing it safe because I chose a time when he was just getting to know these characters. I know sooner or later I'll have to go for it and step a little away from canon. Even if it's a step, haha! D:

Thank you so much for the wonderful comment, Lenina!! <3

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nomango January 28 2008, 08:06:59 UTC
I love how you bring out Sawyer's contrary nature, and his struggle to just be - whatever he is. Saying it and meaning it, saying it and meaning something else, just saying for saying's sake *g* - love this peek, and knowing you did it in a couple of days is just fantastic! :)

And hey, stop complimenting me! *blush*

Also, guess who finally finished her emails?!

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thecorporeal January 28 2008, 20:28:17 UTC
Thank you~! :D Yeeees, I adore his contrary nature - that he has a need to oppose everything he does and what everyone else does, and then he'll have those moments when he'll stop struggling and give in. One of the many reasons we love him - he takes the cake of complexities! But yeah, I'm glad I was actually able to complete 2,000 words, and that my portrayal of Sawyer doesn't get out of line. ;] All thanks to yoooou~

Neeeeever~

Whoo! I just read it! And you will so be getting a reply from me, haha!

Thank you for reading, Jess! <3

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