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Art in Sexuality
May 11, 2005 22:30
(my poetry)(please comment, i need some suggestions (
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elijahxcoldiron
May 12 2005, 10:03:34 UTC
just so you know, its 'lose' instead of 'loose' only one 'O'
im sorry if im being a gramatical bitch.
i like the rest of the poem though.
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de_la_queso
May 12 2005, 16:28:06 UTC
i want you to fuck me like a blank canvas
hell yeah
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fancypantsies
May 12 2005, 18:56:52 UTC
its missing something.
i love the idea
but its missing heart
personality...
SOMETHING i cant identify
<3
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jfkassassinator
May 12 2005, 21:14:14 UTC
The poem seems worse when reading the words than when hearing it im sure..
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im sorry if im being a gramatical bitch.
i like the rest of the poem though.
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hell yeah
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i love the idea
but its missing heart
personality...
SOMETHING i cant identify
<3
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