The Arcing of a Life...[Harae]

[thedarkmother]

Warning : This is long, but I am very happy with how it turned out. Remember, feedback is <3.

Comments

[perfectedadept]

Wow.

Just wow.

[thedarkmother]

Squee :) Thank you. I'm working on the battle now. Hopefully I will have that done tonight. I think this might explain a few scenes between BA and H here lately.

Oh god, I don't know if the next one is going to be a powerful enough follow-up to this one. I hope I haven't shot myself in the foot.

[perfectedadept]

Less can be more, especially when it comes to descriptions of Kung-Fu Fightin'. Less gore, more Art - like a John Wu film!

[thedarkmother]

Woah-ho-ho-hoooooooo ;)

Oh, don't worry, I have ideas. It's just that I'm wondering if it will be as poignant to the inner development of the character as this one was.

We'll see. There's a lot of things in this next one that will have to remain unsaid for right now.

[fire_and_fate]

I have next to know idea about what this all was about, but it was a good read nonetheless. :)

[thedarkmother]

This was about the Scelesti attack. More shall be revealed next post, but I'm glad that you liked it :)

[fire_and_fate]

*no idea, even. Stupid sleep dep.

[kol_isha]

That was amazing. Thank you for sharing it.

[en_sof]

Oh aye. Someone who completely understood, in the end, why he died. I heart you so much for all of this post though...the whole thing was something I couldn't stop reading. Phenomenal work luv.

Just wow.

[codex_umbris]

I love this post. It's just increadbily moving to read.