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Mar 14, 2006 19:03

Characters: Joo-eun, Pietr
Pairing: none
Rating: Teen (it's a little violent)
notes: I don't know when I wrote this, to be honest. It's old but it's better than nothing, and maybe it will inspire me to write some new stuff. I'm revising it a little. It was trying to be artistic but mainly just came off as fuzzy and hard to understand.

The shirt fabric slipped out of Pietr's fingers and the body hit the ground with a thud.
He slipped to the ground, banging his knees against the tile.
Joo-eun tore herself out of Val's arms and flew at him, her screams fuzzed and muted to his ears.
"You bastard! You bastard!"
". . .For you," Pietr rasped, his voice surprising to hie ears.
"Who asked you to fucking kill him!" she screamed, beating him down, one solid punch after another connecting with his chest until he fell back
head banging against the tile
and Joo-eun fell onto him, crying into his collarbone as if he cared.
"For you," he repeated dumbly. She sobbed louder, hot tears pooling where neck met clavicle. His fingers skittered across the floor around him in brief arcs
like spiders
blood creating slick friction
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