Kudos on a job well done! I laughed, I 'aww'ed, it was just a great read all around! Ditto the last person, I'm particularly impressed with the way you explained Mark's situation, it was understandable for him to feel the way he did and you even worked in a failed-startup backstory. I was expecting a much lazier 'take it as face value he is a cab driver' kind of approach when I read the prompt. I also enjoyed your Dustin, and especially the description of his slightly pudgy stomach...haha..I notice those things about friends and it really struck a chord.
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Ditto the last person, I'm particularly impressed with the way you explained Mark's situation, it was understandable for him to feel the way he did and you even worked in a failed-startup backstory. I was expecting a much lazier 'take it as face value he is a cab driver' kind of approach when I read the prompt.
I also enjoyed your Dustin, and especially the description of his slightly pudgy stomach...haha..I notice those things about friends and it really struck a chord.
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