It is. I admit it, it's a tease, it's a pseudo-ending, a painfully flimsy excuse of an ending. My apologies. I had something going on these last weeks that I didn't forsee when I started this fic, and my ability to focus on writing in general and figuring out how to write this threesome sex (sex scenes not being my strong point to begin with) specifically suffered for it. Hopefully I'll eventually write a coda and/or missing scenes for this 'verse, but I decided that it was better to try and power through and post it with a fade-to-black rather than drop out and probably never finish at all.
I'm glad you still got something out of it though. Trying to put myself into Sean's place was a new experience for me, but I always thought that, from his point of view, there really aren't many reasons to like Eduardo, while towards Mark he is simultaneously user and protector, bad influence and mentor.
Again, sorry about the teasing, and thank you so much for reading and commenting!
CODA coda i am all in favour of that :D and it's okay, sex scenes are tough, let alone threesomes xD would be interesting to get Mark or Eduardo's perspectives at the end though. especially regarding the hookup
Wow, you are so clever w/ the juxtaposition of movie lines against all the lovely new material...like you provided so much unsaid detail I've apparently always wanted, and the hair on my arms stood up at this line: He's staying for the Thiel meeting, YESSS!!
You're pretty great for being so busy & producing this fic. <3
this is really fucking good, thank you for writing it. i love your sean POV, you had so many lines that actually made me shiver with delight because they were so clever and spot-on and deliciously manipulative. i am a big big sean fan as a character so this was just perfect and satisfying.
i'll stay tuned for any codas you choose to write, if you in fact do! :)
also, that artwork is fantastic!!!!! so fucking gorgeous, i gasped when i clicked the link.
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but still I quite liked this. interesting view into Sean's perspective on Eduardo and Mark
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I'm glad you still got something out of it though. Trying to put myself into Sean's place was a new experience for me, but I always thought that, from his point of view, there really aren't many reasons to like Eduardo, while towards Mark he is simultaneously user and protector, bad influence and mentor.
Again, sorry about the teasing, and thank you so much for reading and commenting!
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You're pretty great for being so busy & producing this fic. <3
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i'll stay tuned for any codas you choose to write, if you in fact do! :)
also, that artwork is fantastic!!!!! so fucking gorgeous, i gasped when i clicked the link.
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