demolition lovers

[thedoctorsmeds]

Title: Demolition Lovers
Author: RaeLouise
Rating: NC:17
Pairing: Joe/Nick
Disclaimer: I do not own the Jonas Brothers & this did not happen. I also do not own the lyrics used in this piece, they belong to My Chemical Romance and The Used.
Warnings: pretty long, incest, underage sex, swearing, alcohol consumption
Word Count: 4871
Summary: Joe

Comments

[raelouise]

Thank you so much, really- your comment made me smile SO wide.
And, I shall! I've been enjoying basking in it via the window but now, a celebratory trip to the park is in order.

[ethan_aral]

that was so heart breaking beautiful. for a moment i thought it would be too much, that they would lose themselves and it's crazy, but KOL came to mind in that instance XD
but you grounded them and saved them and it works beautifully.

it was so into character and soooooo joe to go that crazy and ask nichols to chose him over god. i think that's my favourite part, the sum of their entire lives.
i's like joe choose nick the day he was born. like from that day on god never stood a chance over nick but in his crazy, oh how i love you joseph, self absorbed antics he wasn't aware that somewhere along the line nicky did the same.
and it's so fucking beautiful that hurts and makes tears roll down my cheeks.

[thedoctorsmeds]

Wow, really... Gosh thank you.
I'm so glad you found this to be in character- it's weird, but I was kind of inspired by Joe's on stage movement & stuff.
Also glad that you really understood my intent.
Sorry about the tears, but thank you for your beautiful comment =).
also, adore your icon!!

[ethan_aral]

you are most welcome.
and i totally get your inspiration because seeing joe on stage, well it totally paints him in a different light.

thanks, used it because i didn't have powerful enough joick XD

[ivebeenburgled]

Dude, this is absolutely stunning. Every sentence in your descriptions is like a poem in itself and the mood of this is breathtaking. The unbelievable ache of their tortured love is palpable.

I wish there was more I could say. Just, wow. One of the best pieces I've read.

[thedoctorsmeds]

Thank you so much.
And you've definitely said enough, because right now I'm smiling so hard it hurts & feeling all overwhelmed.

[stillandstorm]

god, that was beautiful.
so raw and real and perfect.
you always leave me breathless, i swear.
amazing job.
mem for sure.
:D

[thedoctorsmeds]

Thank you infinitely!
I'm uh... glad that I left you breathess? Though remember to inhale!
Thanks again =)

[thedoctorsmeds]

Thank you so much & I'm glad that you enjoyed the music!!