Comments | thedoctorsmeds: I’ve got no right to win, I’m just caught up all in the battles

thedoctorsmeds

I’ve got no right to win, I’m just caught up all in the battles

Jul 25, 2009 17:35

Title: I’ve got no right to win, I’m just caught up all in the battles
Author: RaeLouise
Pairing: Joe/Nick
Rating: NC:17
Word count: 3330
Disclaimer: I claim no ownership over Joe and Nick, and this most probably never took place. A work of fiction. The title & cut belongs to Slipknot.
Warnings: incest, breath control play/gagging, dom/sub, top! ( Read more... )

pairing: joe/nick, fandom: jonas brothers, !fanfiction, !oneshot, !challenge

Comments 13

immaculate_beam July 26 2009, 01:03:55 UTC

I just think Nick being so upset is adorable...and I ADORE how he took care of it!

Breath control...coming on Joe's face...it's all so HOT!

thedoctorsmeds July 26 2009, 09:20:13 UTC

Thank you sweets!! XD

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thedoctorsmeds July 26 2009, 09:20:34 UTC

Haha, awesome comment~ And thanks so much!!

Amazing. mr_nickjonas September 28 2009, 18:50:55 UTC

This is sooooo amazing. Seriously, I was searching all night for a stroy about the two of them, but I didnt want just a dumb story, I wanted one with passion and appreciaition, and boy did you give it to me. I've read this story probably 25 times now, and i'll probably read it a 1000 more, I've even bookmarked this page. Your writing is phenomenal. I love it.