thumbsucker, big brother

Aug 04, 2009 20:47

Title: Thumbsucker, Big Brother
Author: RaeLouise
Pairing: Joe/Nick
Discalimer: Don't own, didn't happen.
Rating: R
Summary: I requested this over at the jbkinkmeme but then I was all bored and inspired by my own idea in the end. So, I have a thing for thumbsucking & it materialised into this *grin* I'm sort of seeing a sequel at some point, cos I kind of ( Read more... )

pairing: joe/nick, fandom: jonas brothers, !fanfiction, !oneshot

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jljso August 5 2009, 02:55:49 UTC
This was just the best - I especially loved your descriptions of Joe sucking his thumb: "splayed his fingers up over his nose and breathed in uneven little snuffles as his eyes got heavy lidded" and "With his thumb in his mouth and his eyelashes resting heavy atop his warmed cheeks Joe looked so deliciously innocent" - too freaking adorable. I love how quickly it jumped from cute to hot.

Who would have ever thought I would have gone for a thumb-sucking kink ;)

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raelouise August 5 2009, 11:59:22 UTC
Thank you so much =) So glad all of that description worked for you- I'm glad that you ended up enjoying a kink you probably wouldn't of imagined, awesome! ;)

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slowwdownsugar August 5 2009, 05:10:54 UTC
There was nothing not perfect about this<3 The descriptions of Joe sucking his thumb were... just, wow. Kind of incredible, without being able to come up with a better way to explain myself? haha. The noises and everything, it was just so clear in my mind. And I love Nick for being needy enough to slip his own thumb into Joe's mouth. Just, YES<3

Amazing job =)

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raelouise August 5 2009, 11:48:09 UTC
Thank you =) I was really hoping my descriptions would do it justice, since it was sort of the core of the whole story. Glad you enjoyed! <3

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! elterriblefizzy August 5 2009, 05:56:48 UTC
As a thumbsucker, I have to say if someone else put their thumb in my mouth, I would punch them in the face. It just wouldn't taste right. Haha, that sounds so lame, but it's so true! ;]

I love your description of how he splays his fingers across his face and they way he would hide his thumbsucking. AND LOL AT DENISE THINKING MAYBE HE WAS A LITTLE OLD. ;] I'm just saying I've gotten shit about thumbsucking since I was five, I'm twenty-one. AND THIS IS ENTIRELY TOO MUCH INFORMATION. ;]

I love this as a collective.

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Re: ! raelouise August 5 2009, 11:43:41 UTC
Haha don't worry about tmi, I never really quit, it's all good..

Thank you for your comment =) And I'm pretty sure if the thumb had been anyone but Nick's Joe would've bit them pretty damn hard =)

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raelouise August 5 2009, 14:13:20 UTC
Thank you sweetie XD

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farewells August 8 2009, 20:59:47 UTC
asdasdkaj i love joe like this, all soft and tired and baby-like. and omggg the last line, so hot.

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raelouise August 8 2009, 22:52:21 UTC
thank you =]]]

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